|Reviews for Natural Justice|
| Firery Ice chapter 7 . 3/31/2013
As soon as i heard the name firefly i was pretty sure it was her, this just confirmed it for me. Awesome story! Plaese update the rest soon!
| Starscream chapter 11 . 1/14/2013
Let's see if I have this right, Michiru's dead, Haruka was a former "Problem Solver," Ami now her sidekick both out to avenge the death of the former.
I'm sold, please continue this story! It's getting good.
| PSVT chapter 11 . 7/18/2012
What a way to do an interrogation. Personally, I would have swapped his line and the reveal that it was a trick, but I still found it perversely fun. I'm still waiting for the true conflict to begin and the impending meeting between Ami, Haruka, and Hotaru. Maybe Ami could hold her emotions in check when that happens, but I have a feeling she won't. Besides, it wouldn't be nearly as interesting. There's not much more I have to say about this one, except that I'm still thoroughly enjoying it.
| petiyaka chapter 11 . 1/17/2012
happy to see you back. not sure Ami will like playing protection only
| PSVT chapter 10 . 4/3/2011
Sure, training is supposed to be realistic, but the method employed by Wise and Haruka was three steps beyond sadistic. Having said that, the strength that you depict Ami possessing to over come both the physical and mental stress and eventually turn the tables on them was just as great, if not greater. The most surprising part of this story is the back story involving the other senshi. My goodness, they've fallen completely apart with no possible salvation. Only Hotaru and Setsuna seem to be remaining, and Hotaru is with their opponent and Setsuna's... somewhere. In any case, this story, much like your others, is amazing in its originality and utterly interesting plot. Let's see what Ami, Haruka, and Wise have to do to get their revenge, and let's doubly see the surprise I fully anticipate when they see that Hotaru's no longer a baby... and is working against them now.
| CheshireRyan chapter 10 . 2/19/2011
Ooooh, you quoted The Offspring! Nice! You get bonus points for that.
| James Birdsong chapter 10 . 2/19/2011
Of course people like the four chapters
| petiyaka chapter 10 . 2/19/2011
usagi in rehab? Man, the situation is worse than i though.
Ami calmed down pretty fast (12 hours).
| Bluewater7 chapter 9 . 2/18/2011
Oh Ami. I love how she handled this, specifically the part where she locked Haruka and Wise in the room and said that she wasn't going to let them out. Although, knowing Ami, it was probably for their safety as much as it was for her own sanity! I think that you captured Ami's reaction perfectly. Could we maybe see a bit of how she got out of the chair?
| petiyaka chapter 9 . 2/18/2011
Ami is really angry. Enraged. But who wouldn't be in such circumstances?
Great job! Love how she broke Haruka's nose. lol
| petiyaka chapter 8 . 2/11/2011
poor amy! But Haruka and Wise will need her later.
| petiyaka chapter 7 . 2/10/2011
NOt the best way to seduce a girl.
| PSVT chapter 6 . 12/28/2010
Glad to see another update for this story. That middle section with Firefly (who I assume is Hotaru and has aged quite rapidly due to being Sailor Saturn) was awesome and very reminiscent of one of my favorite movies in Kick-Ass. If there's any movie from which to draw inspiration, it's that. Of course, once Haruka and Ami get through the lower-level Yakuza guys to hunt down Yugisho, I anticipate quite the shocking reunion with Hotaru. Speaking of which, Ami will need a *lot* of training to even approach where Haruka currently is. Beyond that, it's still the good stuff that I expected, and I can't wait for more!
| James Birdsong chapter 6 . 12/26/2010
Good of course. People like the sixth chapter.
| petiyaka chapter 6 . 12/26/2010
let me guess : hotaru is still alive and she's killing for the monster who killed her mom?
Haruka alone against 20 men? XD
who was she before meeting MIchiru? RAmbo?