Reviews for Sam 'All Spark' Witwicky
kirara the great chapter 5 . 10/17/2013
but you will continue this right? chapter 5 . 1/5/2012
This is a great story..Please update again soon...-
NOWTHAT'SJUSTCHEATING chapter 5 . 12/6/2011
Don't listen to them dicks it's a awesome story you should be chuffed with your self.


p.s. hope i have'nt offended you by calling them dick's if I have then am really sorry.

p.p.s. Don't let the bastards grind you down ;) (something my mam always says to me )
Assassin of Oblivion chapter 4 . 7/9/2011
besides spelling errors, this is definitely well written. All of your fics have great plot lines and enjoyable to read! Keep up the good work!
Peaceful Dragon Rose chapter 4 . 6/30/2011
good chapter
Taylor chapter 4 . 6/30/2011
Really enjoying this, hope u update soon :)
Mika the Dark princess chapter 4 . 6/30/2011
Lov it
Mika the Dark princess chapter 3 . 5/4/2011
Lov it
Peaceful Dragon Rose chapter 3 . 2/9/2011
good chapter
JazzNProwl's sparklingAriaFyre chapter 3 . 2/7/2011
AW! I like it. Bee is so cute mother henning. LOL
xXxOtAkU-444xXx chapter 3 . 10/24/2010
Peya Luna chapter 3 . 10/24/2010
i liked this chapter and the interactions between sambee, plus i totally agree with sams reasoning: the allspark is meant to create or even protect life, using it for the opposite would be a sacrilege...btw, am i correct assuming that when the time comes hell bring back jetfire the same way like jazz?
SavvyEnigma chapter 2 . 9/14/2010
Keep at it-you're doin' good.
Peya Luna chapter 2 . 9/12/2010
im definitely among the 'finally!'-bunch (and hoping to see more updates soon, no matter which story) aside from that, i really like the chapter and the development isnt too fast for my tastes. as you pointed out, we all know whats going to happen, so writing it slower would be kinda boring ;-) oh, and i totally loved the galloway-moment, no story is complete without this a#hole trying his stupid power-play games. i wonder if he even realizes somewhere in his megalomaniac ego that hes causing more damage to the cause than a handful of lesser cons. btw, kudos for writing this completely from bees POV, its nice to have insight in the mind of a big yellow 5 ton metal mother-hen LOL
Peya Luna chapter 1 . 8/30/2010
as ive said before, the first chapter is always the hardest, so dont beat yourself up if its not perfect...the main things are there: sam is till with the bots and happy that way, the suits are still a#holes, the cons are up to something and that weird absentmindedness of sam after his wet-floor-skull-bash-thingy in combination with bees worried inner monologue promises nice future problems, for bees question is totally warranted: even if the power doesnt have effects on sam beside rapid healing, who says it stays that way? and what happens once he gets old enough to die - will the energy allow him to do so, or keep him young, or maybe even turn him into a bot?
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