|Reviews for Someone Else|
| Silvara chapter 1 . 11/23
"We know all our lives that someday, we must leave this place." Slowly, he began to braid her long hair. "It's strange that we know this, and yet…whenever someone dies, we become angry, or sad, and we don't understand why they're gone. We ask Elimine, we ask God, with tears in our eyes and burdens in our hearts, why, and for what reason. But all alone…we know that someday, we, too, must go."
That was moving. Now, are you sure you are a man? I know I'm being silly, but you are so good at expressing feelings-and sumblte enough too.
Also, my apologies in advance to those who like them, but how I would have liked to see Serra without these ridiculous ponytails! I'm sure that she would look beyond lovely. I am a straight girl, but really, Serra's ponytails...
| Silvara chapter 1 . 11/17/2010
The little message is nice and quite true, but to be honest, my farovite part of all of this is the fact that there is a nice Serra characterization, and that Lucius is in there. That, and to think that Lucious probably does dies (does he?) around of ten years after the ending of their defeat of Nergal...gives the discussion a whole new dimension. Sight... Serra. v_v
| SpeedDemon315 chapter 1 . 9/23/2010
I like the overall tone and theme of this piece-how we always know about death and its doings but are most of the time caught unaware by it when it comes and claims the life of someone we know. We know its out there and yet, we question death's choosing.
As always, marvelous oneshot!
| Ms. Krys chapter 1 . 8/30/2010
This is absolutely beautiful. You're my favorite FE writer, you know that? /stalker
I'd love to read a Karel romance fic by you someday. Just sayin' xD
| Trevor X chapter 1 . 8/29/2010
Aw - I'm sorry you didn't get this done in time. It's really quite a lovely piece of contemplation. Is missing (") to start off Serra's last statement though. But lovely and readable nonetheless.