|Reviews for Dragonheart|
| Moon Shawdow's Saint chapter 1 . 6/27/2011
i read the entire author's note. and i must say: this was a great story. but why doesn't anyone just change the story so Jason DOESNT die?
A better ending would be: right before he drew is last breath: Abby(a new elicitor, who cured disease with a single touch)jumped in to their bubble, and touched Jason's chhek lightly. he was better, suddenly. then Abby and Jason gre up and got marrried. better right?
but, yess well written, and a great story overall
| Ridicully L chapter 1 . 11/11/2010
I wonder if you stole a few pages from the draft while it's going to print, lol. You could so put them back in.
| This is good and all chapter 1 . 8/31/2010
I like this but you know your treating Jack and Ellen unrighteouly..