|Reviews for Predators in Afghanistan|
| Perfect Carnage chapter 14 . 7/31/2015
I love the uncharacteristic happy ending. I don't think that an organisation with a 'No Witnesses' policy would be willing to pick up sole survivors, but maybe it helps to be done with Predators.
| Xantalos chapter 14 . 4/17/2013
Very nice! This is one of the better Predator fanfics I've seen out there, and though I may grumble a bit about it following the standard Predator formula and the Predators being do inept in melee combat against main characters, it was pretty good to read. Thank you for posting!
| Brandon Vortex chapter 14 . 8/24/2012
wow dutch sheffer and weyland yutani conspiracy...now thats you dont see everyday
of course that this is awsome story!
| Josef Engle chapter 1 . 5/6/2011
if only sigh this is just what the afghani's need to clean out their headgear LOL nice creative work.
| Hat O' Doom chapter 14 . 12/4/2010
Just finished reading it. Great story!
| Hat O' Doom chapter 7 . 12/2/2010
Hooooly shit! This story is pure awesome. I'm already half way done but I don't want it to end...Well I guess I will have to finish it tomorrow.
| GrayHuntress chapter 14 . 10/9/2010
Execellent action! Really intrigued by the ending scene and looking forward to more.
| SomeGuyOverHere chapter 14 . 10/7/2010
Holy Shit! Without a doubt one of the absolute best fanfics ever written in the history of Predator fanfics. That was an absolute wonderful way to end the series! I loved it from start to finish. It had a few flaws in my opinion but they were barely there. Five stars! I'd put more but the scale doesn't go any higher.
| GrayHuntress chapter 13 . 10/3/2010
Yea! Great action. I loved the pred chuckling at Charles' question. Very brave oomans.
| Spartan067 chapter 3 . 9/26/2010
With all seriousness: this is good. You have the guns, action, and diversity right to
make this fanfiction worthy of being a predator film.
| GrayHuntress chapter 11 . 9/26/2010
Its good, but the foreplay is lasting a little too long for moi . . .
| GrayHuntress chapter 10 . 9/22/2010
Love the continued build-up hope it is leading to some real surprises. I just love it when I can't figure out a story ahead of time. Looking forward to more (this was such a short chapter - pouting . . .)
| GrayHuntress chapter 9 . 9/17/2010
Wow, the shit just deepened. Looking forward to more. . .
| GrayHuntress chapter 7 . 9/10/2010
great cliffhanger. I enjoyed the LAPD reference to Pred II in the beginning. Please keep going . . .
| PhelpsHaven chapter 6 . 9/9/2010
Great story so far. Subscribed.
P.S. Did you know the word "Portnoy" translates as Tailor in Russian?