|Reviews for TPAP Extra 2 Now Go We In Content|
| my1hopeful chapter 1 . 9/19/2010
Aha! I acknowledged the three kids and wondered where Edward's fourth was. Excellent! For me, the idea of four kids is terrifying. I can barely accept the fact that I might someday want to be a mother, and my imagination has never ventured past the idea of one. But Dadward is ovary-bursting awesome. :-D
| ciastulek chapter 1 . 9/13/2010
I love DeNiro face! And I'll have to make a hard copy of this fic for a future tutorial purposes... :) I loved it. Thank you!
| Edward'sDJ chapter 1 . 9/12/2010
I loved seeing Edward and Bella's love extended so beautifully and convincingly to a family.
| Darcyfan14 chapter 1 . 9/9/2010
| lurker123 chapter 1 . 9/7/2010
Goodness, what a great outtake/epliogue. I read this last night while I was in the middle of a million things and I just needed to take a break. Perhaps b/c of my distractions I wasn't immediately affected, and I guess not moved to write a review at the time. And while that might be bad reader behavior, I'm really glad I waited, b/c now I can let you know that entire paragraphs of this chapter stuck with me, going over and over in my head throughout the night. I'm not nearly eloquent enough to explain why - I think it's because you're such a talented writer of dialog, whether inner thoughts or between characters.
"If there is a boy pony in that collection, he needs a gender reassignment...Henry roles his eyes...and vacates the premises because what's about to happen here is slightly less interesting than watching Grampa Charlie use a level to ensure his front hedge is plumb..." - too funny
"...I'd put this early-forties version up against the late-twenties version of her and call this one even sexier, because this one is nicer to herself and has no problem at all telling the world what she wants from it." - beautiful
So, these and other passages have stuck with me, not to mention the general tone of the story, and its resolution.
Thank you, as always, for sharing your writing gift on this community.
| browneyeddaisy chapter 1 . 9/4/2010
| coxie chapter 1 . 9/4/2010
I adore a good Dadward, especially this one. I miss this story so much, and this outtake was perfect. :)
| jilburfm chapter 1 . 9/3/2010
Very cute:-) I think I'd freak out WAAAAY more than Bella! Love the pony dating show. And Edward is an amazing husband for knowing when to talk! If only all men were so gifted.
| Multitaskmom chapter 1 . 9/3/2010
I LOVE his last line. So excellent. I love that your "Outtakes" are really Epilogues. :) Thank you for writing such fantastic characters. It has been a pleasure.
| hotmama4jd chapter 1 . 9/2/2010
Ah, I just had a 'whoops!' baby this year (my older kids are 7). Poor E&B. I laugh in their general direction. Suckers.
| lovetoplay2 chapter 1 . 9/2/2010
Fantastic & so funny- I loved it! Thanks! :)
| asiula chapter 1 . 9/2/2010
Awwww, that was such a nice ending! :)
| tweely chapter 1 . 9/1/2010
Such a perfectly sweet start to a rainy Wednesday. Who needs a scone with their coffee when there's a TPAP outtake to read? Not-so-feeble-minded Edward is a kick!
| The Love Peacock chapter 1 . 9/1/2010
awww that is so adorable! i love at the end of the story you get a little peek into how their lives are 10-15 years on!
| Ellinor chapter 1 . 8/31/2010
Thank you (and thank you, AccioBourbon ;D) for sharing this.
I love your writing, your language, your way of creating such wonderful images.
Thank you for sharing your talent!