Boo-Hoo! That is so sad! I really liked it. Any particular reason that her name is Samantha Bowers? Pretty amazing, and...

DFTBA!

So sad. :(

I love it. :)

Very nicely done. Slightly over-dramatic and vague, which aren't necessarily bad. There were only a few grammatical issues, but since this is pretty short, you should probably have looked it over more thoroughly.

But this site is for fanfiction, which I'm sure you know is fiction written for a certain published work. Which this story unfortunately doesn't fall under.

If I were you, I'd delete and repost on FictionPress.

Well this was delightfully cheerful, yet depressing and violent. I totally wasn't expecting the ending. Though I probably should have XD

Really well done, Luna. I loved it.

Des was right. It was epically (spelling?) awesome. I really liked it, Luna. I felt bad when she died. Poor girl. I kinda want to know more about it though, like who see was, why the man killed her, all that good stuff.

*doesn't know what else to say* So, good job(:

~Tay(:

Dark. Morbid. I like it.(-)

It has that real dark feeling inside. Which makes it perfect.

This is great, Luna. I only notice some minor mistakes.

7/10 (because I think it would be better suited for fictionpress)

Thanks, much.

~Rachel.

Hai Luna. -waves-

This is like, infinitely creepy even though I know what your explanation is. But it's also well written.

I think you should italicize the song lyrics, though. Not technically wrong, but...I just think it would look better. And you're missing a period near the end, I think.

Other than that, good. *thumbs up*

~Kal