Reviews for Falling For the First Time
Rod Vulpine chapter 8 . 3/5
Next upload which is... perhaps never. Well it was a fun read. Too bad I never got to the juicy part. Where Shampoo defends Keitaro from these vile beasts that are the so called "tenants" of Hinata inn.
Rod Vulpine chapter 7 . 3/5
Mai Waifu! XD
Rod Vulpine chapter 4 . 3/5
X/ Okay this is bs. These women are too nasty to be love interests to Keitaro. And how can they expect for him to like them when all he gets from them is pain and suffering. Also they like to use him as his chore monkey.
Rod Vulpine chapter 3 . 3/5
Yes! About time our guy had some good luck! He deserves it!
Rod Vulpine chapter 2 . 3/5
Bruh! Da lucky bastard! He doesn't know just what great fortune has befallen him. Shampoo will work herself to the ground to make him happy and Naru? All she ever did was hate him for being a man and punch him. Do the math Keitaro! It's as easy as 11.

Also I love how easily they found enormous loopholes in Keitaro's promise! XD Cologne is amazing!
Rod Vulpine chapter 1 . 3/5
Typical MC. Too focused on the promised girl to see a superior candidate for his affection when he litterally hits her in the face. XD

Seriously though, the fact that this guy thinks that the harpies at Hinata inn are blameless tells me he is suffering from one hell of a Stockholm's syndrome. They litterally bully him physically every day and he just think that's normal and should just think of it as normal. Well, hopefully Shampoo will defend her future husband to death. ;)

Also I totally ship Keitaro and Shampoo now! :3
NarutosBrat chapter 7 . 2/16
You know, that entire situation with Keitaro getting married was Naru's fault, and when they realize that, I think it might get interesting.

If it's not obvious by now, no, I didn't like Naru. Frankly, I place her in the same category as Akane Tendo, and Pt.1 Sakura.
NarutosBrat chapter 2 . 2/15
Personally, I think Shampoo is a better catch than Naru, but that's just me.
Alamandorious chapter 8 . 9/5/2015
I really, really hope you'll consider continuing this.

It's a fun read, and it's interesting seeing a character aside from Ranma get crossed over into something else. I'm curious to see where this is going, and again I hope you will continue it. Last chapter was also a bit on the short side, but it was still amusing.
Guest chapter 4 . 8/27/2015
Maybe you need to stop writing you are killing good stories we want to see updated by piling on 100 new ones.
Guest I Guess chapter 8 . 2/1/2015
I don't usually do this for fanfics that haven't been updated in five years, but I'm marking this story to be followed. There aren't that many good Love Hina fics, and even fewer that are complete, but I hope you finish this one day. There need to be more people making both Love Hina fics and Ranma 1/2 fics featuring Shampoo and I was really glad to find a fic with both a Xian Pu pairing and the makings of an interesting Love Hina fic. The situation for their meeting is highly believable considering how often Keitaro is blasted out of the dorm. The pairing is unique and it will be interesting to see how it plays out. Along with Keitaro now knowing their feelings, and Su's comment on multiple marriage partners, it will be interesting to see how Keitaro's love life plays out. Please pick this fic back up and finish it. Will Keitaro end up married to more than one woman? Is Xian Pu pregnant after their first time? How will the other girls react to Keitaro's new wife? How will the amazonian girls react to Keitaro's abusers? I really hope to see these questions answered and this fic completed. Thanks for the good read.
flood graves chapter 8 . 6/17/2014
nice app. of the rules of anime #145 all old people know each other !
delax chapter 4 . 1/3/2014
Mmm Motoko... Lovely combo of confident skill and disgustingly adorable naïvety.
delax chapter 2 . 1/3/2014
This is quite fun so far and it is a relief to find one with a clear grasp of English (just had a couple with constant misspellings and a hatred for the word "said". bleh, unreadable.)

It is nice to see a Ranma character, all love is unrequited and a joke in the original (also most are towards Ranma, and he's kinda a jerk).
Love Hina is similar harem-thingy, but at least romance gets screen time.
FrostyMan122 chapter 1 . 11/5/2013
oh that was hilarious! and the best part? I can totally see something like this happening to keitaro! the poor bastard...or is it lucky bastard? lol. Xp
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