Reviews for Falling For the First Time
delax chapter 4 . 1/3
Mmm Motoko... Lovely combo of confident skill and disgustingly adorable naïvety.
delax chapter 2 . 1/3
This is quite fun so far and it is a relief to find one with a clear grasp of English (just had a couple with constant misspellings and a hatred for the word "said". bleh, unreadable.)

It is nice to see a Ranma character, all love is unrequited and a joke in the original (also most are towards Ranma, and he's kinda a jerk).
Love Hina is similar harem-thingy, but at least romance gets screen time.
FrostyMan122 chapter 1 . 11/5/2013
oh that was hilarious! and the best part? I can totally see something like this happening to keitaro! the poor bastard...or is it lucky bastard? lol. Xp
Leah chapter 8 . 5/10/2013
Are u going to update this story? I want to know what happen next? What shampoo thought on his tenet? How his tenent feel about keitero being marry? Is his grandma going to make appearance and her take on her grandson marriage along with his family, too?
BukkakeNoJutsu chapter 8 . 2/14/2013
I so want to read more of this. Wuhahahaha
omnimon12 chapter 8 . 10/31/2012
I really wanna see the next chapter for this...Will the tenants fight for their manager?
Blinded in a bolthole chapter 8 . 8/7/2012
or ever, actually.
Blinded in a bolthole chapter 2 . 8/7/2012
The tricky old ghoul is damn good. Though she is not as good as Anything Goes Ranma.
Blinded in a bolthole chapter 1 . 8/7/2012
The promised-girl should not have punched the immortal keitaro this hard, I mean the infamous violent tomboy is not THAT vicious...

A pity Shampoo did not have much of a personality development (very much like the whole Ranma bunch), she could have been my favorite character in the series, as well as the prettiest.
calamine chapter 8 . 4/30/2012
please, please update this story it was well written and i really want to read about shampoo's reaction to motoko and naru
pensuka chapter 8 . 4/9/2012
man i wonder what will happen next here please update it since haruka's reaction of what keitaro did to shampoo was funny i wonder how the others react i best be sure to have some popcorn in stock
Qaletaqa chapter 8 . 3/9/2012
Hey has this story been abandoned? Cause I was really getting into it.
Freehawk chapter 8 . 1/23/2012
Great story, filled with humor, well written and detailed.
reven228 chapter 8 . 12/24/2011
oh come on, why didn't you finish this story! It's amazing thus far and you missed the big climax! Please for the sake of the story, keep goin and stay golden
narutofan876 chapter 8 . 12/20/2011
plz update this story or else your muse gets it thats right i'm holding your muse hostage and u can have it back once u update this story. Other than the short chapters i have no other criticism of this story.
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