|Reviews for Too Human|
| DarkFetherStorys chapter 8 . 7/29/2014
and anotherone joins the list.
To bad you seem to have forgoten thisone AS.
| dragonsong2795 chapter 8 . 11/30/2013
Great story, I can't wait for the next update!
Now several questions.
1. Humanity is referred to as the 'Eighteenth Angel' multiple times, so will Shinji acquire powers from being partially Human?
2. Will Shinji eventually have an S2 core? if so, will it be different due to his humanity?
3. Finally, I have some Ideas for a NGE fanfiction would it be alright if I used Arael's personality from this fanfiction?
| James chapter 1 . 10/4/2013
I cry that this story seems to have been put on the back burner permenatly it seems, i was so looking foward to Broken Pieces Pt 2 /crys a river
if you have plans for this story can you plz plz plz let me know?
My yahoo email is fallen_angel_james at yahoo dot com
Thanks for taking the time to read and hopefully reply!
| Lu Bane Na chapter 2 . 6/15/2013
Pretty nice chapter, though I don't really get the omake?
| Rickmer chapter 8 . 2/13/2013
Very interesting so far and quite different to the usual countdown-to-angel-17 or rebuild-after-third-impact stories.
| Black Ace 0 chapter 8 . 1/19/2013
Please update soon.
It is getting interesting.
| Reishin Amara chapter 8 . 11/21/2012
we need more fem angel one is great!
| Zyvorg chapter 8 . 10/11/2012
Good story, although a little darker than I prefer. I also wish there was a little more Shinji/Arael fluff. Still I hope you come back to this. It's a fun story to read.
| divinedemon1 chapter 8 . 5/22/2012
This has been an awesome story keep it up.
| bigdave chapter 3 . 3/6/2012
So far, you have a good story going. I like it.
If you still need opinions on doing a lemon, Just remember less can be more. Some of the best lemons are when you make people use there imagination.
| New Order chapter 8 . 2/26/2012
A long time ago I remember this community to be rich and varied, holding as many things as the imagination could hold. That time has long since passed and now is only visible through the brony community which I adore. This is a relic from a time long since passed, and like anything old it is better than what we have now. Continue writing for as long as possible, you have something great if you finish it.
P.S: You should check out , they have an active community in which every story is looked at with a much larger frequency.
| Marco A. Salazar chapter 1 . 2/13/2012
As usual of you, man, nice story so far.
| James chapter 8 . 1/24/2012
I have become very intrested in your story and look excitedly for the next chapter to be produced!
I would love an update on that is possible, my email is fallen_angel_james at yahoo dot com
| Black Ace 0 chapter 1 . 1/17/2012
| Fangking2 chapter 8 . 12/27/2011
Ah Kawaru was always a good boy...oh well. I can't wait for the next part.