Reviews for Purple Sticker
KimberLeighLynne chapter 1 . 10/25/2015
This is a well thought out story...I like that this story did not include a lemon...I don't think it needs one...There are some spelling and wording errors that in my opinion do not take away from the story but should be corrected when you get the chance...Keep up the good work! I am looking forward to reading more of your work!
xXYour DoomXx chapter 1 . 4/27/2014
I liked it a lot
ReighHPFiction chapter 1 . 8/12/2013
I really tried to read this but there are so many spelling and grammar mistakes I can't Getty through it :(
AmaiNeiko chapter 1 . 5/6/2013
Kyaa this started out like any other story and as it progressed it just kept getting better and better! There are spelling and grammar problems that I know everyone else has already mentioned but that aside this story was adorable and well thought out. It's paced very well for a one shot and I just loved how Gaara taunted Neji and how you made Gaara so sexy. I mean he's so blunt and honest telling Hinata all these naughty things he feels yet later he's still respectful saying he apologizes for being inappropriate but he still meant it all anyways it just enough to make you melt! If you made a chapter after this just for the lemon it would be the icing on the cake! Wonderful one shot, thank you so much for sharing!
kandita chapter 1 . 4/28/2013
I oh I love this...Gaara is a riot not to mention
meza chapter 1 . 2/20/2013
presence s-smoothing...I'm guessing you meant presence SOOTHING. There are a HELL of a lot of spelling errors in this. You really should go back and correct this.

PS: I really hate when people overdo Hinata's stutter.
KagomeMarie chapter 1 . 6/4/2011
awe very sweet story to bad it didnt go further
xXxItaHinaSasuXxX chapter 1 . 5/25/2011
Wow that was really good!

I was completely engrossed and ask that you update soon :)
euforie chapter 1 . 4/18/2011
like it
kazumalova chapter 1 . 4/15/2011
can you PLEASEEEEEE make an after story of this? maybe part lemon? PLEASSSEEE!
Guest chapter 1 . 2/1/2011
Please write more!me and about 31 of my friends will be checking in ,we love it.
Allistra chapter 1 . 12/6/2010
Please take note:

- 'To' and 'Too'

- 'Quite' and 'Quiet'

- 'Though' and 'Thought'

Also, your sentence structuring could do with some work. Please make sure that you type in the correct tense. I also suggest that you get a Beta for your work.

This is a nice story, but there are many grammatical errors and mistakes which mar this story. Please take care to keep Gaara and others in character,
reviewer chapter 1 . 12/3/2010
i love ur story, it's really cute and interesting. i just have 1 critique, u should really go back and proofread the story, like at 1 part you were writing smoothing, but i think u meant soothing. There were a lot of errors like that, and they really interrupt the flow of the story, which would really be a shame with such a great story.
kay white chapter 1 . 11/29/2010
WHAT no sex wtf
Bornonceagain2543 chapter 1 . 11/28/2010
Awesome story! I love Hinata, she's just so cute!

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