|Reviews for Ominous|
| xBitterSweetDreamsx chapter 8 . 1/26
I'm so confused. So is takuya alive or not? Very intense story
| javii-izu chapter 7 . 8/3/2012
Please continues the story
| Xx-Melanie-xX chapter 8 . 8/26/2011
I came across your story a few days ago and I've been reading it nonstop. It's so suspenseful and full of mysterious, I was at the edge of my chair trying to guess what is going to happened next XD
The romance between Zoe and Takuya is the cherry on top. It's just perfect. I hope that you'll continue it, I'll be waiting once you do.
| utsukushii04 chapter 8 . 3/25/2011
Whoa! I bet Takuya used his marital arts skills to get out of that!
Koji: Takuya? Martial arts? Skills? That's funny! _
Me: ha ha ha ha...you're right!
Takuya: Hey! I have skills!
Koji: Sure, those that belong to an idiot!
Me: HAHAHAHAH. That wan't that funny but I just laughed to annoy you, Takuya.
Anyway, that was awesome! I want to read more! But take your time. look at me, I don't update my stories that often-wait, that's exactly what I need to do...tomorrow...
Bye! Hope all is well!
| utsukushii04 chapter 7 . 11/25/2010
OOOOOHHHHHH MMMMYYYYYYY GOOOOOOOOOODNNEEESSSSS
That was so intense! How could Takuya be there and not be there? O.o
Oh my gosh! And Kouichi! Grrr.
I'm sorry I couldn't review any earlier. Why can't there be no school!
Koji: then there would be no internet, no , no digimon, no-
Me: No! You speak blasphemy! Don't even say things like that!
Koji: Ugh, I'm surrounded by idiots.
Kojui: I want to die.
Me: Oh, my gosh, I hope you can update soon! But of but cant that is okay!
| addicted-2-oxygen chapter 7 . 11/13/2010
Aaagh! The awesomeness is ridicously mindblowing... O.o
That was amazing :) And I was in it! Yup, everyone, that's me... Amy ;) You are seriously my bffl...!
Oh Koji, in the staff room again! What does he do in there?Lazy ass...
The suspense continues... Takuya is dead! Or is he? :) I love this! :P Im so mad cause I'm doin this review on my iPod I can't copy and paste my face quotes :/ Grr... But I swear there was like loads of them!
Well, I'm gonna go and photocopy our awesome page of notes (you know everone else will be supremely jealous!) but I'll text you later ;)
| blackandblood chapter 7 . 11/12/2010
Damn, this is getting REALLY intense. I'm on the edge of my seat, trying to figure this story out. But I can't! You evil bitch, I can't figure out what's going to happen! But that's good, I love stories that aren't predictable. _ I can't wait to see what happens next and I hope you update soon. See ya!
| addicted-2-oxygen chapter 6 . 10/23/2010
Hey! I actually SWEAR that I had this whole review typed up, but when i went back to submit it... Wait for it... THE WHOLE THING WAS GONE : so this is the second version :)
Omg, I freaking loved this chapter :D Taki is just so awesome! Your actually such an amazing writer and your descriptions are so accurate... The bits if humor slotted in throughout the story make me L.O.L... Heheh...
I think my fave line so far, just cause it was just so epic, was 'Does kOji live in the staff room...?' Oh Koji and Taki... It's actually scary how alike we are to them! Aaagh, next thing you know we'll be turning in digimon on the bus :)
I'll go and text you now so... Bye fanfiction world... Hello xfactor :D
| utsukushii04 chapter 6 . 10/22/2010
Yeah! Kill him good! _
Oh, Zoe, why are you saying stuff like that..tsk tsk...
And Kouichi, how in the world is she not going to be mad. I side with Koji! He made some very good points!
I hope it all works out. I realy want to know why he had no veins to take blood out...and the eyes...hmm...
| blackandblood chapter 6 . 10/19/2010
Yay! Takuya's out of the hospital. Sure, he left on his own accord since the cops were gonna show up, but he got out nonetheless. But now there's more trouble in paradise for him and Zoe.
Zoe: It never ends.
Me: You're telling me. But it makes it more exciting. _ Can't wait for the next chapter.
| utsukushii04 chapter 5 . 10/9/2010
Oh it's okay, I've been doing the same thing! I go to sleep like at 1 in the morning almost everyday! _ But I'm fine...no really I am *eye twitches*
But oh no! Takuya! He's hurt! No! I hope he's okay. And Kouichi you idiot! I would have never expected that from him. tsk tsk. Koji, as always, being so blunt...*sigh*
And Zoe gave the names out! Oh my gosh, haha, Kouichi used google to search! _
Great job and I can't wait till next time!
| blackandblood chapter 5 . 10/9/2010
Wow, Kouichi's an asshole... But moving on, I really hope Takuya's okay. He and Zoe are fucked if they don't think of something. At this rate, they really are going to have to skip town. But first, Takuya needs to feel better enough where he can actually leave the hospital. This is getting really good.
Takuya: No, it isn't! I keep getting hurt!
Me: Eh, suck it up. Zoe usually gets the shit end of the stick in my stories, so this will balance it out. But yeah, Zoe was right; you are an idiot.
Takuya: You suck...
Me: Anyway, I can't wait for the next chapter.
| addicted-2-oxygen chapter 3 . 9/20/2010
Hehehe... Guess who? Well, in case you were panicking in suspense, its just me :) The weird, slightly crazy friend you love too much to tell me to *$$*%&$&($&% off ;) Dontcha love me!
Anyways... Im FINALLY reviewing this! I know, I know, I have issues with deadlines and instructions :)Buuutttt... This all goes back to the last paragraph which is ultiatly the reason why you are not going to murder me *giggles like a 6 year old as she blushes*
I LOVE this story :P Its just so dark, mysterious, and... just plain creepy! Haha, other reviewers, I KNOW THE ENDING! And I not telling :P Mwhahaha!
Fave lines:I passed JP, Tommy, Amy, Dermot and Andrew.I passed Bairbre, Mairin, Megan, Dearbhla and Laura. I passed Jenny and Daniel. -I know all these people! Go me :)
'No your not' Koji said equally as monotonously, but he always speaks like that. -Oh Koji... I love you so... You and your monotone voice (I actually do know someone who talks like that AlLL the time. No joke. And its not you, Lindz) ;)
It had squiggles of colour on it, from where I was standing, which pretty much summed up Takuya's drawing ability. -Oh Taki...
It was true that the cake was burnt beyond all recognition, so black it could be a lump of coal. But that was because, even back when we were kids, Takuya was never to be trusted around was deemed a pyromaniac at age 7 by doctors. By that time, he had set 4 houses, 12 table clothes, 3 dresses, 1 wedding cake and 5 curtains on fire. Since then, he has set over 500 things on fire in one way or another, always unfortunately by accident.-Jeez, its like your freaking life story :)
Well, thats all Ihave time for tonight (I swear ill review the next 1 tomorrow! Cya tomorrow ;)
| utsukushii04 chapter 4 . 9/19/2010
Oh Ferdinand! I love it! I live for randomness! But that was so cute! And Kouichi is getting a little too...what word can I use...um, confortable...but anyway, great chap and update soon!
| blackandblood chapter 4 . 9/19/2010
Hey, that was a really good chapter. Kouichi is beginning to annoy me a bit with his texts...
Zoe: He's only kidding.
Me: But it's making Takuya upset! We don't want to upset our poor, little Takuya. *pats him on the head*
Takuya: Wow, are you actually being nice to me?
Me: *smacks him upside the head* Don't go overboard, Kanbara.
Takuya: T.T Meanie...
Me: Anyway, I'm liking the aspect of them having a new life. Sounds like Zoe went through hell and back to be with Takuya, but I can't blame her. I would've done the same. Well, I can't wait to see what happens next. See ya _