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Lloré

I loved this the passion the darkness every single word

Wonderful !
It was wonderful !
I love it so much ! How you described Itachi, how you described Pain, their relation (though I'm not especially in love with this pairing, or with any pairing excepted SaiSaku and Suika maybe, but it was the first text I've read on this pairing, and it was wondeful !). Like your other stories, there's so much feelings in this one, so much I couldn't turn my head and my eyes and I couldn't stop reading...
There's a few sentences who break my heart, I don't exactly remember which one, because I read it yesterday before going to sleep (I was supposed to go to bed but then I found your stories and I kinda... go to sleep a hour too late ?), but I remember that all the moments Itachi's talking about Sasuke were heartbreaking, like the moments Itachi's ill, and the moment he comes back from Orochimaru.
I love the ending, the last sentence, and the other one, just before : "I wish I could", just perfect. I love how you describe the interactions between Akatsuki's members. I mean, they're criminals, they're not really close or something, but I love the way they care for each other though, in a strange way, but they still care.
I love how you write this one. There's a lot of moments, brief moments and we read the whole thing and we have the impression of a hundred pieces together, and each one of them has his own importance, his own breaking words, and I really love this impression.
I'm a but confused though. I don't understand why you don't have more reviews, I mean for this one, for "Five roads home" and the other fic I let a review on a few days ago, and which deserve a lot more. Now you really are one of my favorites writters. And I'm very glad I found you with "Five roads hom", which is really my favorite one.
I'm sad though. I don't know the other fandoms you're writting on, so I can't read your other stories .
Again, thank you so much for your stories ! And excuse me if my grammar's sometimes wrong, or if I repeat myself. I only learn english at school. I'm a translator too. But a translator with no time right now. First, when I read "Five roads home", I wanted to ask you if I could translate it into french. But sadly I didn't have time for it. But maybe in the future I will ask you ? I will be very glad to do it ! Your texts are just perfect.
Thank you again !
kimi-ebi

speechless.
heartbreakingly beautiful.
I must sell my soul to write something this good XD

one of the most well-written fictions I've read so far.

Perfect. Well written, but not only that. It was sexy, without being too explicit (i think porn like descriptions are a bit out of context, in other angsty or darkish fanfics); the characters were perfectly depicted, all of them,and the pairing was interesting. No out of character rape that becomes love, you show an interaction that I really find perfect. It was dark and angsty. It had an interesting plot.

I really loved it, and wish I could read more.

This leaves me kinda speechless. It's just... Damn. I simply don't have words, so I let my actions speak for me.

Even though this story was hard to understand at times, I found it extremely brilliant ( I wish there were more stories like this)... I really enjoyed it because it showed (and the emotion carried!)the burdens Itachi and Pein had to bear. I'm looking forward to some more stories from you. This is exactly the kind of story I was looking to find today.

Oh, why isn't there more reviews for this? It's absolutely wonderful!

The writing style is so strange, jumps in uneven steps, and it keeps me on my toes. I never knew what was going to happen next, despite knowing the actual story line. I really liked this, you did an amazing job. I also really liked the end, how the ninth number is the one that would never come, and how in the end, Sasuke was all that Itachi thought about. I loved that you kept the characters in character, and how not many things were fluffy and cuddly. I really liked the short moments in there that seemed like the moments shared by Pein and Itachi almost seemed tender, but then you shattered that by reminding me that Itachi was dying.

This, is so awesome!

This was certainly a strange story. The writing was disjointed and drew some odd conclusions, but it was strangely poetic at the same time. The ending was captivating, and it was dialogue and description like that which kept me reading... I couldn't stop reading until the very end.

I'm surprised this doesn't have any reviews yet (or maybe I shouldn't be, it's quite a hard piece to comment on afterall).

There are a couple of spelling errors (for instance you refer to Kakuzu as 'Kazuku' in some places) but I found your writing style very nice and clear.

I loved the storyline. There were parts that made me feel almost bad I suppose, but it's good when you feel something while reading.

What I really wanted to comment on was this part of dialogue -

"At least you'll see him again."

"My brother, or my murderer?" he murmurs.

I found it brilliant and absolutely beautiful. I'm not sure if that was your clear intention, or more of an accident, but either way,in those couple words you managed to show Itachi's views. He's not going to meet his little brother that craved his attention, but an avenger. Well, I suppose I'm silly but this line really did strike my heart.

Thank you for writing this!

~N.V.