Reviews for Pretty When You Cry
TallDarkAndHandsome chapter 1 . 5/31/2013
OH wow. Haha. Ok then. Nice interpretation of Daroline scene at the end of that episode in season 1!
Eli chapter 1 . 3/18/2011
I love it!
Guest chapter 1 . 1/18/2011
Hot
BeautifulStrongFullOfLight chapter 1 . 12/20/2010
perfect song choice for this fic loved it please continue
sweettwilightvamps13 chapter 1 . 9/20/2010
This has got to be one of the best songfics I've read! You got talent. Youve set a great scene with awesome detail! I just adored the darkness and... The fatalism of the story. For a while there I thought he'd kill her. I know I'm twisted but I thoroughly enjoyed the whole story and hope to see more of your works!

Just a random thought: I was listening to 'Lithium' by Evanescence while reading this and I think the lyrcs fit that story pretty well too!

Xx

Tedy

PS I would be really happy if you R&R some oft works if you got the time too. Thanks.

Xx

Tedy
Jens chapter 1 . 9/12/2010
The song was an excellent framing choice. The desperation btwn the two is really apparent. Good pacing. Really beautifuly done for the 1st chapter but if you go on, it needs more conversation between them. More fire. More reason not to squash desire.
Cherrywood Lies chapter 1 . 9/10/2010
I loved this! Theres actually an equally awesome tribute to daroline with this song on youtube - you should definitly check it out. I totally want a sequel! XD
xxxTheLittleOnexxx chapter 1 . 9/9/2010
Loved this :) I also love Vast so it was all good for me :)
mehr03 chapter 1 . 9/3/2010
awesome fic...loved it...hope u write a sequel..thks and gudluck
EvilChick13 chapter 1 . 8/31/2010
I really like this story, and the pairing. I really hope you write more!
Layla55 chapter 1 . 8/31/2010
Oh my god! You should continue :(! I'm soo intrigued :D!