|Reviews for Only the Beginning|
| luchii cullen chapter 10 . 9/9/2013
oh my god, i love your story i mean it makes me cry! youve been getting so much better through the story, is really good, i laugh and cry i one chapter and thats amazing i mean not alll fanfiction stories are soo powerfull, sorry if i make some mistakes but i am from venezuela and my first lenguage is spanish, even though i love english and i am learning it i make some horrible mistakes sometimes so i apologize. Well thats it, i hope you read this :) and i wish you the best.
| Cathy chapter 23 . 7/25/2013
This was a good story. The only thing that pissed me off a little is when Bella TOLD Edward to choose Rose and then flips the fuck out later. I also lost interest cause it seems as if you're some what re-wording the entire series.
| tay tay chapter 23 . 4/29/2013
lolz-ing bout Charlie! _
| tay tay chapter 22 . 4/29/2013
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| U suck chapter 30 . 1/6/2013
How the hell could you do that. She was supposed to choose Edward you heartless freak
| Rosalie hater chapter 13 . 1/6/2013
I dont like Rosalie
| Sadness chapter 1 . 1/5/2013
That was so sad... I started crying :'(
| youngandmature chapter 17 . 12/16/2012
I'm sorry but this chapter ruined the story in my opinion. Bella is completely irrational and bipolar, and everyone heaping blame on Edward is ridiculous.
| Guest chapter 30 . 7/2/2012
I FUCKING HATE BELLA SO MUCH. EVERYTHING ABOUT HER I HATE. SHE HAS NO PERSONALITY AND IS A SELFISH, OBLIVIOUS FLAWED MARY SUE THAT EVERYONE LOVES NO MATTER HOW BADLY SHE TREATS THEM. EVERYTHING THAT COMES OUT OF HER MOUTH OR THAT SHE THINKS IN HER HEAD IS PURE FUCKING GARBAGE. EDWARD IS AN IDIOT TO LOVE AND THINK THAT THERE IS ABSOLUTLY NOTHING WRONG WITH HER. Shame, such an amazing guy wasted on a FUCKING ANNOYING OBLIVIOUSLY SELFISH DUMBASS
| paralighter4ever chapter 2 . 5/16/2012
This is a cute story, but you should work on your tenses. One minute you say "I" and the next you say "her" or "she".
| shelllynn22 chapter 30 . 9/18/2011
Good story, Your are just plain evil with the ending though.
| may96 chapter 1 . 9/6/2011
The Prologue is so sweet!
| 4Ever-Twilight-Luva chapter 30 . 8/15/2011
I LOVED your story! It was amazing!
This chapter was so sad. I actually cried. :'(
And I can't wait to read the sequel!
| 4Ever-Twilight-Luva chapter 22 . 8/15/2011
FINALLY! He admits it! :D
| 4Ever-Twilight-Luva chapter 10 . 8/14/2011
Edward's an ass...