|Reviews for On Grey Mornings|
| Kefe chapter 2 . 9/5/2010
Oh, so I'm guessing this has to do with the Lewinsky scandal? I wasn't sure from chapter one, but there were little clues in chapter two that pointed that out. So Alice was the person who outed her.
I like it. It seems intriguing. I only knew vague details about the story then, but it's nice to see what you're doing with it.
I thought you handled her feelings well, how she felt, the embarrassment, and paranoia of what people might be thinking about her in their minds, and what she felt about them.
Peter seems like a good friend. And now she's going back to Forks. I wonder how Edward will react when he sees her and with all that's happened. Especially after their one night stand in the previous chapter. I hope she gets somewhat comfortable when she returns home.
Thank you for writing!
| allismiles chapter 2 . 9/5/2010
Yes. I love that you are doing this. Bella's truths are so true, however inconvenient. Thank you for allowing the fandom to be something besides what it mostly is.
| JLalways chapter 2 . 9/5/2010
So i'm guessing she'll run back into Edward back in Forks. I like this story. Bit different from anything i've read before. Lookinhg forward to seeing where this goes.
| Sari9 chapter 2 . 9/5/2010
Yikes,the scene with Peter's family is the one I dreaded on Monica Lewinsky's behalf, meeting a guys parents for the first time! And Peter's only a friend. Good storyline!
| CrumblingFool chapter 2 . 9/5/2010
"He just looks like such a sweet little man!" I exclaim.
You know that face cats make when they taste something bad? I'm making it now.
Heh. Also, idiots always look harmless.
I loved this chapter. You gave us just enough detail that we know what happened, how she's dealing in the aftermath. We can fill in from what we know of the original incident, imagine how it would happen if it happened in 2010. The Daily Show. Perfect.
Great chapter, lady.
| phoenix fan1 chapter 2 . 9/5/2010
Wow! Was very surprised at the little revelation half way through the chapter! Very interesting indeed. I'm wondering how I will feel about this Bella. So far she seems like a sympathetic character.
Looking forward to more! I love your writing style... the way you write keeps us so in the moment with the characters.
PS... saw your tweet about how it annoys you that now you have a new story they go back and read your old ones... Well I read Age of Consent for the like the 6th time this week and if you don't like it, tough! :) Ha ha! Seriously though, I love that story so much and I'll probably read it ten more times! It's one of my most favorite stories ever and I'd like to rec it in the next chapter of my story, but I won't if you don't want me to.
| Sari9 chapter 1 . 9/5/2010
Yay, a new littlesecret story with a bit of a naughty Bella. And no one can accuse you of cockblocking.
| contreplongee chapter 2 . 9/5/2010
I love it when she talks about bringing down an entire presidency. It's the perfect dose of arrogance, the 10% might be my favorite.
| KiaraRaj chapter 2 . 9/5/2010
She brought down the presidency! I want to know more. Eagerly waiting for your next update.
| the granddaughter chapter 2 . 9/5/2010
ooooh a Bella Lewinsky! I like it... can't wait to check on Edward- after almost one year, will he still be living with his parents? LOL
Thanks for another great story!
| Domysticated chapter 2 . 9/5/2010
no questions, because I trust you to answer all of them as the story unfolds. So I had already suspected in ch1 that this was some sort of Lewinsky story... only with a Republican?
I was too young to fully appreciated the vilification Monica Lewinsky went through at the time, and def too young to feel really angry about it. I think your story is going to make me angry all over again, with interests.
Oh and ILY Jon Stewart. Like, HARD. I think I love him more than Rob. The day Rob went on the Daily Show I literally almost died :)
great job, looking forward to next chapter
| adw11 chapter 2 . 9/5/2010
I'm curious to know what went down. Was it a Monica L. Sorta thing? Did Alice out her? She just left E without any goodbye, can't wait to see how he reacts the next time he sees her. A lot here to mull over till next update.
| StormLondon chapter 2 . 9/5/2010
Aaah, so it seems like she slept with the president.
I'm enjoying your writing so far and look forward to seeing where you take this!
Thanks for the update.
| What Obsession17 chapter 2 . 9/5/2010
Wow...Bella has gotten herself in some serious trouble and Alice did the doing. Very interesting, I can't wait for more :)
| WallaWallaMama chapter 2 . 9/5/2010
Oh, juicy scandal! The intern that brought down the presidency? I' m hoping we'll get to see how she was sucked in (I know there's a really bad pun in the somewhere...), where it all went wrong, and then see how the love of a good man can help her recover. Can't wait to see how the good citizens of Forks treat our disgraced Bella.