Reviews for Beside Still Waters
Domysticated chapter 1 . 9/6/2010
An intriguing premise... a relationship that starts with a (seemingly?) rash decision, and deteriorates to the point of divorce. Second thoughts, regrets, families getting in the way...

This Edward seems confused and hardly capable of knowing what he wants. Is it because he's very young, unused to make up his own mind?

And (hooorraayy!) a sympathetic Renee. Looking forward to reading more!
misskma chapter 1 . 9/5/2010
I came to check this out after seeing it on the WT forum.

A great start, you sure have got me thinking.
chriserlyn chapter 1 . 9/3/2010
Congratulation on writing this story!

A very good start, you've made the gears in our heads start spinning.

Why would their divorce be better for them in the long run? Why did they divorce in the first place. Of course you don't have to answer that.

How long did Edward stay in North Carolina? Is he back for good in Seattle?

It seems that Edward remains ok with Renee so that's good.

xo

Chriserlyn
Indunga chapter 1 . 8/31/2010
Great start... I look forward to reading more :)
twilly chapter 1 . 8/31/2010
I found your story from the tease on ADF. I'm looking forward to reading more.
Lexie2516 chapter 1 . 8/30/2010
Sounds interesting. Can't wait to find out why they divorced and why he stayed gone for so long.
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