Reviews for The Secret
hollyhalebnichorelloregelolove chapter 1 . 8/31/2010
awwww so cute!
prodige chapter 1 . 8/31/2010
I really like this, it makes a hell of a lot more sense than the original.

I like the relationship between these two, i.e. that Emmett is an impatient character and Rosalie seems perfectly used to this.

The only thing I would suggest is that you develop the ambiguity of the situation a little further. (:

You're a lot better than you make out to be. I hope to read more.

MLGates chapter 1 . 8/30/2010
AAAWWWW! How sweet!
hergoldeneyes chapter 1 . 8/30/2010
I really like this idea. I always doubted Rose's self control. How was it possible that she could have killed not only Royce and his friends, but come across a bloody human body in the woods and carried him for miles without caving? I like to think she's not really as strong as Stephenie Meyer tried to make her seem.

Of course, execution is something everyone can work on, but you're not nearly as horrible as you give yourself credit for. You're actually quite good; much better than I was when I started.

I look forward to reading more :)


April; hergoldeneyes