Reviews for Lovin'
EvilGeniusBookWorm13 chapter 1 . 1/5/2011
Nice! I heart Kames...what does PWP mean tho? Never mind...u dont need to answer that
noahfuckingcrawford chapter 1 . 1/1/2011
Oh my FACKING god! It was amazing! :D
Pained Past97 chapter 1 . 11/21/2010
OMG! LOVED IT! THIS WAS JUST COMPLETELY HOTTT! KEEP IT UP.
AnimeAddict4Life chapter 1 . 10/20/2010
awesome me love
TheHornyVirgin chapter 1 . 9/26/2010
O.o Dude! That was...HOT! :D Ten-and-a-half inches? O.O Woah! *bounces up and down* SQUEEEEEEEE! Loved it! :D
Bam4Me chapter 1 . 9/5/2010
That was hot.
Mochi no Yume chapter 1 . 9/1/2010
What else can I say but PURE HOTNESS!

I like that you included both parts just because it's double the hotness and gives us a nice idea about what the others are doing :P

Absolutely fantastic!

I hope you will write more Big Time Rush smut in the future!
nightshadow321 chapter 1 . 8/31/2010
Ray you are my favorite writer of all time. I'm sad that you will take a longer time to post because of college and I totally understand but when you do write make another amazing story like "Love inside the halls". P.S. Love inside the halls made me cry alot and the ending was amazing. P.S.S Good Luck in college
unthinkable13 chapter 1 . 8/31/2010
I love reading you never seise to amaze me!
quote intangible chapter 1 . 8/31/2010
This may sound weird, but I had a craving/looking for some good Kendall/James PWP, and I definitely just found it.

Forceful!Kendall is soo HOT! And the Cargan wasn't bad either.

There were a few typos and the pace of the story was a little too quick, but this was an enjoyable read and who doesn't love porn!

Now that I have probably thoroughly freaked you out, I'm just going to end this review.

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jannessa13 chapter 1 . 8/31/2010
really ray you need to stop making dalton bleed so much or you might kill him but i love your stories 3
Demon'sAngel17 chapter 1 . 8/31/2010
...Ummmmmm I have a problem between the loss of blood from the nose bleed this caused and the remaining blood going south I feel very light headed, but DAMN THAT WAS FUCKING HOT! Alright I loved this more then anything. Man that was just dude words can not do justice for this story it rocks that fucking much. But damn dude that was hot as hell. and I'm not just saying that because you dedicated this to me either. But I need to go clean up the blood now and will a certain part of my anatomy down "I now you don't want to hear that but deal with it I have no problem saying it." But awesome Ryan truly kick ass hot as hell and sexy as hell awesome. And I'm glad you put the use protection in here people really should use protection when they are having sex.

Dalton