Reviews for You Ain't Ever Gonna Burn My Heart Out
Whirlwind421 chapter 1 . 9/8/2010
Interesting! Good story. I liked the ending. Though, John's response surprised and didn't surprise me.
MartaJones chapter 1 . 9/6/2010
An interesting concept, but I don't think you've got the personalities of the SGA-1 right. As seen in other episodes, Sheppard WANTS to be in Pegasus, not on Earth. He would never want to stay here...and neither would Teyla be willing to permanently leave her people in Pegasus while she is in the Milky Way. Are they tired? yes, but a few days R&R and they'll be chomping at the bit to get back to work...and their work, and home, is Pegasus. NOT to mention that there are STILL a lot of Wraith in Pegasus...and having Atlantis in the MW, leaves the Pegasus galaxy unprotected. None of the team would be willing to do that...just because ONE Wraith superhive was destroyed, there are still dozens, or maybe HUNDREDS of Wraith Hives in Pegasus
Sachita chapter 1 . 8/31/2010
Hello wneleh!

Interesting and unique story with very different insights from what you get to read normally. I liked the perspective you wrote from. Very well-done and unique. Thank you for the story- I enjoyed reading it. And poor burnt-out John - but I could see him saying all these things- especially the part about his team deserving a chance to live- always looking out for everyone else, isn't he...So again- great story and I am sorry if my English in this review is bad- it's not my first language and it's pretty late here so I am finding it very hard to string together coherent sentences...(-;

Have a nice week,

Sachita