Reviews for Forever and Always Broken
Al3xisCull3n chapter 13 . 7/16/2011
Omg! I can totally not believe you just killed off the wholecullen family! Are you crazy? I hope you wrote a sequel and I'm going to have a deeks to see if you have!
Al3xisCull3n chapter 3 . 7/16/2011
This story is really good, Lindon should go die though!
xxxPeacexxx chapter 14 . 7/14/2011
SEQUEL! Definitely write a sequel. There is a unique storyline- a bit confusing but cool
CrbRocks chapter 14 . 7/11/2011
eeeppppp make a sequel
XoXoxx chapter 13 . 7/9/2011
i think you definitely need a sequel! there's so much more that could happen :o go for it )
nickiecullenforlife chapter 14 . 7/9/2011


nickiecullenforlife chapter 13 . 5/21/2011
Ok well... wow!

I am really really confused!

Its really good but confusing

Renesmee C. Cullen da original chapter 12 . 4/8/2011
XoXoxx chapter 12 . 4/3/2011
woahhh ok! i gotta sayy i'm thoroughly confused :P i have no clue what's happeninggg or why people disappeared xD its definitely interesting :) and i like the detail! ) thanks for mentioning me, really glad i could help . keep it up~ looking forward to reading what happens next!
XoXoxx chapter 11 . 3/22/2011
hey! so first thing, i think you should disable the block against anon reviews :P people just might be too lazy to sign in and stuff, i almost didn't review cuz of that but i figured you needed some motivation~ and also i know a lot of people that dont make accounts and will probably not make one just so they can review :) i'm not really a writer, but i do really like reading the stories that people come up with... i think you should keep writing regardless of the reviews, i know they keep you motivated as a writer, i hear that all the time, but you should believe in your story as well you know? speaking of which, i do like how this story is going :) it's got a good mix of human emotions and interesting super powers, though i cant say i really understand reneesme's powers, maybe you could clarify somehow next chappy? or just in an author's note or something, whatever works :) umm what else, i love how you spelt aaron :P havent seen it spelt that way before~ soo im hoping this story goes well & that you continue, im wondering what'll happen with aaron (can't remember how you spelt it :P all i know is it was close to airien?) i'll check once i finish reviewing lol anyhoo him and coraline, and the wolves & reneesme considering she hasnt imprinted yet.. which reminds my lyndon's a unique name too lol good job with that :) so thats about it! i'm deifnitely wondering whats gunna go on lol keep with it~ update soon? oh ps. maybe you could put in a little more description, like describe their surroundings more, how things look, the weather, peoples expressions..and i think you should try avoiding the _ and I's statements, rearrange it, i just think it makes the sentence sounds choppy? anyhoo don't be offended or anything, honestly just trying to help (constructive criticism you know?) :) anyways take care~ ill be following the story so hope you update :)
CrbRocks chapter 11 . 2/19/2011
please start updating your storys linsey and not your house of night and fablehaven ones please!
Peperocks chapter 1 . 12/21/2010
I luv it :D
nickiecullenforlife chapter 8 . 11/29/2010
poor Dusttie

I think I know who those wovles were ahhhhhh they were...

Not telling

Where did you get Renesmee falling down a hill?

Are you mocking me!

Love the story!


nickiecullenforlife chapter 7 . 11/29/2010
Love the name!

Love the their personatally!

Love the background!

Love this story!

Love the person who is writting this story!

My bestie is an awesome writter
nickiecullenforlife chapter 6 . 11/29/2010
O.o Airenn?...

What an awesome way to spell it!

Trance Nikkie been there

love it!
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