|Reviews for Fevers|
| Teen Cullen chapter 1 . 3/23/2011
aww sweet and very realist point of veiw! I love it!
| MoCullen chapter 1 . 3/4/2011
Last line was powerful.
| malleelee chapter 1 . 2/4/2011
The passing of time using body extremes is brilliant. The indication of change with temperature, also. To be unable to mourn is crushing. A lot of meaning in a few words here.
| cejsmom chapter 1 . 1/29/2011
Carlisle bringing Edward to say goodbye to his mother beautiful.
| DebbieCDC chapter 1 . 1/10/2011
Wow, you know this is the first story - OS or otherwise - that I've ever read of Edward's transition. Very very interesting. Any thought of expanding it?
| terri lynne chapter 1 . 11/28/2010
I liked your story. I'm also reading your other ones. Please keep writing your very good.
| Rebadams7 chapter 1 . 11/22/2010
Really tender and stunning piece of work
| alc219 chapter 1 . 10/17/2010
I love reading fics about Edward's change! The part with him and his mother is so sad! xx
| tracylk chapter 1 . 10/11/2010
You know, Savage... the only bad thing about your writing is it always leaves me wanting MORE! So... I guess that's actually a good thing?
Keep up the good work. Thanks for putting your creative talents to paper and being brave enough to share them with us!
| The Oldest One chapter 1 . 9/18/2010
Bittersweet little vignette!
| roon0 chapter 1 . 9/18/2010
Powerful stuff. You have made us really feel for the boy. I find myself grateful for Carlisle's intervention. Edward is a tormented soul but knowing he will eventfully find happiness, makes it better.
| keyecullen chapter 1 . 9/14/2010
I liked it. I have always had an interest in what happened after Edward had changed. I mean, he has been around forever but we don't really know what all he did during that time prior to Bella coming onto the scene. So, it is nice to read this.
| Merina Green chapter 1 . 9/8/2010
That was a great look at how it happened!
| bklover08 chapter 1 . 9/4/2010
Nice bit, although know that I don't mean nice in the conventional fashion! I enjoyed the look into Edward's head at the bitter end of his human life, through your perspective! Thanks for this! ;)
| saraamin chapter 1 . 9/3/2010
painfully beautiful art by its self thank you!