Reviews for Fevers
biblepam chapter 1 . 9/1/2010
I love how you wrote this little story.. allowing Carlise to be considerate enough to not only allow Edward to say goodbye to his mother, but assissted him in touching her face one last time.. very touching.. thanks for the post.. loving your writing as always.. Pam B.
katmom chapter 1 . 9/1/2010
You have certainly capture the sadness here...

Glad I know the rest of the story!

Thanks for sharing...

Kathie
Coleen561 chapter 1 . 9/1/2010
I think you did a great job with this one shot. Thanks for posting this.
cvds chapter 1 . 9/1/2010
Loved it. Very well written.
Guineapig8732 chapter 1 . 9/1/2010
I loved it! I love everything you write, there so well done :)xxx

gp
sherryola chapter 1 . 9/1/2010
This was good. edward's feelings when his mom died brought tears to my eyes. The whole thing about not being a man or soldier, just a little boy alone, well, that really got to me. And his croaked out "mommy" Very sad but his love was very beautifully expressed.
jct2004 chapter 1 . 9/1/2010
Heartwrenching! How sad to think of his inability to actually produce tears to cry for his parents and all he'd lost. I really like that Carlisle gave Edward a minute to say goodbye to his mother. That's exactly in-line with his compassionate character. Wonderfully written.
1853kaz chapter 1 . 9/1/2010
Good! Always enjoy a little more canon Edward. Even if he's in pain. :)
Ticcing Bat chapter 1 . 9/1/2010
very good
CurlyWurly66 chapter 1 . 9/1/2010
I enjoy all your stories and I am sure that this one will be just as good!
Just Sus chapter 1 . 8/31/2010
Well...I think you did a good job with this, although it was kind of depressing...Having Edward's mom die in front of him, and having Edward so ravaged with the Spanish flu, only to be replaced by the burning of his change into a vampire by Carlisle's bite.

I liked it, tho'!

xoSus
icrodriguez chapter 1 . 8/31/2010
This was positively the most powerful and heart breaking telling of Edward's last moments before his transformation. I was surprised with how emotional this made me. I have never been able to stomach a grieving, hurting, or heart broken Edward. And this glorious rendition is a perfect reflection of what his agony can reduce me to.

I think this was perhaps some of your finest work. Please give serious consideration to exploring more canon EPOV moments.

You completely destroyed me with this. And I thank you for it.

Godspeed.
Alby Mangroves chapter 1 . 8/31/2010
I loved that Carlisle allowed him to have a moment to farewell his mother, that was heartbreaking. Nicely written.
elena6375 chapter 1 . 8/31/2010
Very nice. I like your take on this.
bellabells7279 chapter 1 . 8/31/2010
love it. could you write H&D outtake of when Bella is changed too?
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