Reviews for Fevers
Discontinued6375 chapter 1 . 8/31/2010
Very nice. I like your take on this.
bellabells7279 chapter 1 . 8/31/2010
love it. could you write H&D outtake of when Bella is changed too?
AdonicaSS chapter 1 . 8/31/2010
An article I read awhile ago compared the recent "swine" flu to the "Spanish" flu of 1918. The flu had no known cure, a victim was very lucky to survive. Most, like Edward's family, did not.

It is unimaginable that flu has so many victims, most of whom were in excellent health, and in the prime of life. As always, Savage, you capture the emotions of your characters with uncanny accuracy. I felt like I was standing in that hospital ward. Edward's fear, for his parents and himself, touched me.

Thanks for writing a compelling scene that I've not read in any other FF.
SohotforEdward chapter 1 . 8/31/2010
Great one shot. That was even better than I had ever envision it. Loved the fact that Carlisle took him to his mother to say goodbye.
cat5050 chapter 1 . 8/31/2010
Love your writing style.
Bower-Of-Bliss chapter 1 . 8/31/2010
I love reading these sorts of missing moments. Well done.
TooManyAPsEqualsNoLife chapter 1 . 8/31/2010
That was so good! The part with his mother made me cry it was so good. I liked the way you ended it as well. With him thinking he was in hell.
funny cause its true chapter 1 . 8/31/2010
I love this! I like how you did the hot cold thing.. And the part with his mom and the beach made me wanna cry...
Athazagoraphobiac chapter 1 . 8/31/2010
Oooo. I really liked it. Great job.
As Clear As Black chapter 1 . 8/31/2010
Very nice.
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