Reviews for Betrayed
NCISfan chapter 12 . 12/23/2016
Short short short chapters. Irritating.
NCISFan chapter 6 . 12/23/2016
Interesting story but the chapters are too short.
brendafay chapter 23 . 7/4/2016
love it
madnessdownunder2 chapter 23 . 11/22/2014
very nice!
danceofshadows chapter 23 . 1/20/2014
I love protective Tony!
Kay Hau chapter 23 . 4/10/2013
This is really good! I've never actually watched NCIS, only familiar with the characters through crossovers and fanfiction, but everything in this seemed spot on! Love the realism, as opposed to the idealism we sometimes go a little overboard with in fanfiction. Beautiful ending, and I totally think you've launched Tim to my favorite character!
midknightmist chapter 23 . 1/15/2013
wow, great story. nice tim whumping. thanks for sharing.
Trinkies chapter 23 . 11/16/2012
This was absolutely beautiful. Thank you.
Infinitechange chapter 23 . 9/1/2012
Awww, very fun story! -
cmcaggia3 chapter 23 . 8/25/2012
Just a quick question, why are you such a good writer? Why do you make me cry and laugh and just plain old feel confused and happy and sad all in one? How do you do that? It's pure amaazingness. You just leap into the characters and portray them with perfection almost more than the actors:) uuh3
cmcaggia3 chapter 1 . 8/25/2012
OMG. first chapter but i have to go. hooked ouchie lol
MysteryFan15 chapter 23 . 4/13/2011
This is such a great story! One of my favorites The idea and writing was great. Can't wait for your next one. :)
alix33 chapter 3 . 3/21/2011
"Several held the information that McGee knew would peak the hacker's interests," - "pique the hacker's interests".
missyAn chapter 23 . 3/17/2011
I loved this story so much,my heart broke when Tim thought that his team didn't trust him.I would love a follow-up team should never have doubted him. Gibbs doesn't deserve Tim's forgiveness and I cannot see how he can trust his team ever again.
Evci chapter 23 . 3/2/2011
I LOVED IT ! An amazing story !
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