Reviews for Breathing Underwater
Diomede chapter 1 . 6/22/2013
Thanks for the update! I look forward to reading what this virus is (and if him giving her mouth to mouth places him in danger).
GinnyStar chapter 13 . 6/17/2013
It took me a bit to find this story, I ended up starting from the beginning I like this so far
Diomede chapter 1 . 6/15/2013
Hope you return to this one and update it soon. I enjoy reading where this is building to.
fds chapter 2 . 10/25/2011
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Lynnp chapter 10 . 8/5/2011
Nice to see Joshua sticking up for her. It was good to see Nathan having a word with the other officers. Looking forward to your next update.

Lynn

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Lynnp chapter 9 . 7/28/2011
Good to see you back with this. However, it would be nice to see other members of the crew in this fic as well as Levin, Nathan and Kristin. I hope Sammie gets over her lack of self confidence. Looking forward to your next update.

Lynn

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Lynnp chapter 6 . 2/16/2011
Sorry, I somehow missed this one! Looking forward to your next update.

Lynn

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Susan M. M chapter 6 . 10/25/2010
Some typos, not as bad as in previous chapters, so huzzah for the improvement. I had a little trouble with Dr. Levin knowing more than Dr. Westphalen in this chapter. Yes, I know it's a Mary Sue, and yes, I know Joshua Levin and Sammie Williams are destined to be soulmates. But she's an experienced diver, a physical oceanographer, and an MD. I had a little trouble believing that she wouldn't know more about treating this problem than Dr. Levin. Just because he's the hero doesn't mean he should be infalliable.
Lynnp chapter 5 . 9/8/2010
A good couple of chapters, but I do suggest you get a beta for all the typos and grammar etc; although it didn't put me off it might others. Looking forward to your next chapter.

Lynn

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Dismayed chapter 5 . 9/7/2010
The run-on sentences shouldn't be too hard to correct. The information overload, however, where it looks like you A, did your homework, and B, want everyone to know you researched thoroughly, that will be harder to tone down. But not impossible, if you're willing to put the work into it.
Lynnp chapter 3 . 9/7/2010
Good update. Looking forward to more.

Lynn

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Susan M. M chapter 3 . 9/6/2010
I'm having trouble getting a feel for the characters' ages. They feel very young to me -probably the ink still wet on their doctorates - although you did say some of the people in their group were in their 30s. And because I'm getting such an impression of youth from the characters, I'm having trouble reconciling Sammie's youth with "best in my field." She doesn't strike me as old enough to have the experience to be best in her field. seaQuest already has Lucas as resident juvenile genius.
Lynnp chapter 2 . 9/3/2010
Short but sweet. I liked that Dr Levin heard her! Looking forward to more.

Lynn

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Lynnp chapter 1 . 9/1/2010
Looking forward to seeing where this goes.

Lynn

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