Reviews for The Black Family in Seven Parts
vapiddreamscape chapter 7 . 7/6/2013
This story is wonderful. I love the looks we get into characters both well-known and obscure. Also, I enjoy how the chapters are long enough for me to feel like I'm getting an entire story, but not their not long enough for me to get too bored and stop halfway through. The spelling and grammar is good and, in my opinion, the characterizations are spot on. It's well written as well. All in all, a great piece.
The Unwritten Vacancy chapter 7 . 2/27/2013
Amazing! I think my favorite was the last one!
InkandRoses chapter 7 . 1/1/2013
This is a lovely tale. I like the way you've explored the Blacks, who I have always found interesting.
mainstreet52 chapter 7 . 12/18/2012
Acceptable. (See? One word. :P) But seriously, it was an enjoyable enough read. It fills in some gaps. Little bit simplistic, but it works.
Batty Buttercups chapter 7 . 11/26/2012
Every single part of this fic has been wonderful and sweet and tragic. Most of these characters were never encountered in the books, yet they all seem perfectly in-character. I can't think of what else to say other than that this was a joy to read. I'll be reading more from you. :)
Batty Buttercups chapter 3 . 11/25/2012
Phineas is the most amazing person ever. His kindness and compassion - forgiving his family for casting him out?! - are wonderfully shown. Excuse me as I sniffle in a corner from all these feels.
almanera chapter 3 . 10/1/2012
It's very interesting that you brought up lesser known Blacks and the story of Marius is certainly very tragic. Had it been up to me I think I would have added more angst, for it must have been horrible for him to realize that he doesn't have magic and have his parents immediately turn their back on him...As far as I remember, it was never specified by JKR what eventually happened to him (correct me if I'm wrong), yet the very fact that a child is thrown out in such a manner is very sad...Moreover, it makes one think that in real life children end up in hopeless situations as well even though they're innocent and the latter is a horrible thing...So, in just a few words you sort of nailed the problem. Well done.
Mei Ju chapter 7 . 9/24/2012
Wow I love your story. It was creative and well thought out. Each chapter had just enough of detail and back story. Well done!
MuggleCreator chapter 7 . 9/5/2012
Nice stuff. Fits well. Like the way you've just done snippets...
Guest chapter 7 . 8/25/2012
I really enjoyed reading this particularly the part about being a squib! How sad that this would have happened.
Guest chapter 7 . 7/3/2012
i was wonderin who wld b number 7 and this is a perfect ending!
Kaya chapter 7 . 6/20/2012
Wow. That was amazing! Thank you for writing this story. I loved it. You captured the family dynamic well. You really showed the combination of fear and determination that these individuals had. Brilliant job.
Rebecca chapter 7 . 6/8/2012
This was really, really good. I really... I dunno... felt it, somehow. I especially liked the chapter about Andromeda, it almost made me cry. Simply marvellous :)
xxXGGXxx chapter 7 . 5/24/2012
brilliant ;)
Lee's Descendent chapter 7 . 4/15/2012
This was amazing! I really loved how you made the lives of all the Blacks who were blasted off the tree seem so real. The emotions were just spot on. I can't really pick a favorite, but it's probably Phineas (And Marius. And Sirius. And Andromeda. And Alphard. And-). I really loved that you could take these characters, have very little information about them, and make such a beautiful story.
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