Reviews for Parallax
shloop chapter 2 . 6/10/2013
aww man! I wish you'd continue this. It looks so interesting, and I already feel a little invested in both characters. (I really hope that they don't fry)
well I'm off to creep on your profile to find other stories. taa!
Goodping chapter 2 . 4/14/2011
A very good story, I found it was detailed with out dragging. It was well paced with very interesting ideas for both characters and point plots. The only thing that I would say I would be disappointed about is the fact the chapters are too short, but that could be because I enjoyed the story so much :) I hope you keep up with this story I would hate to see it end in such away and I hope you update soon.
galilab chapter 2 . 2/20/2011
niiiiiiiiice! i really am looking forward the rest of your story! keep it up, it's good stuff
Angmartas chapter 2 . 2/14/2011
But, but, you can't orphan this poor story! Did something happen to you? Has Dragon Age eaten you alive? The entire Starcraft section's filled with OOC and shipping, you come and start a great story in the middle of all that, then you just leave it there at two chapters? Come back! Believable characters! A situation that could go anywhere! You can't leave yet! Think of all the... Okay I don't know what you could think of, but think of them anyway, and write more, because they'll be sad if you don't! Really!

The Starcraft section needs more good writing! PLEASE!
Anomy chapter 2 . 1/18/2011
This story is so amazing.. I don't understand why it doesn't have the amount of reviews it should. I've been reading it hoping that you would continue probably for a few months now. Please don't go!
Norwest chapter 2 . 12/10/2010
I like-y! Any more?
Grinnerz chapter 2 . 10/10/2010
This is extremely good. The best Starcraft fic I've read, and one of the better written stories on the site so far.
Turiski chapter 1 . 9/12/2010
First, I really, really like it. I'm finding it hard to evaluate it for its merits because this is really just the kind of story that I like to read.

Second, the title has me going into major Epileptic Tree mode. 'Parallax' is a very specific word and I hope it means more to the story than 'this one sounds cool.'

Waiting patiently,

Turiski
dfastback68 chapter 2 . 9/11/2010
Great story so far! "Supernova" was a fun mission (then again almost all of them were a ton of fun), and it's always nice to see the story of the supporting cast. Can't wait to see what happens next :)
Boglatokla chapter 2 . 9/11/2010
.ING!

I've been itching to read a good fic ever since i finished the campaign and this is the first well-written one I've come across. I'm already looking forward to what will happen in the next chapters.

Grammar's ok. style is good. but most important of all, pacing is spot on. nothing is rushed and at the same time it's ain't boring as hell either. nice work :D
starspawn07 chapter 2 . 9/8/2010
The characters are very convincing :)

afaik, Protoss blood "burns" when in contact with air, but I may be wrong XP

take your time, but please update :D
Amber Penglass chapter 1 . 9/3/2010
Ho damn! First Starcraft fic I've read, and gotta say, I am pleasantly enthralled! Terminology is all on par, good characterization, good grasp of the para-military feel the game envokes. Can't wait for more!
Khail chapter 1 . 9/2/2010
uhh, hope no one's getting pregnant or anything. hahaha