Reviews for My Immortal
Guest chapter 7 . 4/11
After the mess of having the Amazon's trying to get ranma to follow their laws he would never accept following motokos clan laws and much of it doesn't apply ranma is no innocent demon blades are practically created to trick people into wielding them weaker blades have tricked stronger people then motoko into wielding them and let the blades rake control of their bodies motoko is still a child expecting a child noatter how strong to be able to fight off a demon blade is foolish and making ryoga grand master over ranma completely ruins your story
maryjane5000 chapter 2 . 1/21
Okay I know if you eat mermaid flesh one of two things happen

1) You become Immortal
2) You become a creature

So how is it Ranma is immortal when you say he didn't eat the flesh that means he ISN'T Immortal & the prolonged life he would have had should be shortened since he hasn't done any fighting so ki wells would have lessened
Guest chapter 1 . 7/7/2014
Isn't "My Immortal" the title of what is considered to be the worst fanfic ever? That doesn't seem a very inspired title to use for your own fic...
diamondace4 chapter 15 . 1/2/2014
still trying to figure out why this is T rated lol...you said no lemon but almost ever sec scene is semi written out..that's ridiculous
diamondace4 chapter 2 . 1/1/2014
For some reason the end of this chapter jut makes me want to scream. FUCK YOU CHELLIOS!
diamondace4 chapter 1 . 1/1/2014
ah..the immortality explains how he would meet up with the crews
Maximara chapter 21 . 10/28/2013
I'll a little confused here. In chapter 7 we are told that the Amazons were weakened and this is 10 years after the events that made Ranma immortal but here it sounds like the war started once the Phoenix and Musk learned about what happened to Ranma and annihilated them Amazons. So when did this war start or if the war was over and done why was Ranma still kept confined?
Veedramon chapter 8 . 10/18/2013
Well, is not like he will last long with her anyway...
Veedramon chapter 7 . 10/17/2013
So Ranma got a magical cursed sword...
Veedramon chapter 6 . 10/17/2013
Well. sooner or later someone will eat a mushroom again...
Veedramon chapter 5 . 10/17/2013
I wonder if Tama will get older or younger...
Veedramon chapter 4 . 10/17/2013
Well, eventually Ranma will pass that exam...
Veedramon chapter 3 . 10/17/2013
Well, Ranma is free and has unfinished business in Nerima...
Veedramon chapter 2 . 10/17/2013
Bees uh? Run!
Veedramon chapter 1 . 10/17/2013
So, Ranma will last forever and he is stuck in a mountain...
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