Reviews for The Makings of a Legend v 2
Ethan Demas chapter 9 . 12/29/2014
Betty! Hahaha! Hey, I was wondering... If the planets gravity is the same and the Sun's radiation cuases them to become much weaker, wouldn't the three saiyans try to use this to their advantage for training? Of course their is a Ki reduction and their weaker, but wouldn't it be more beneficail for them? Hope you update again.
Kyoki Kamanoke Shinigami chapter 9 . 4/1/2013
Pyro and Psychopaths are awesome. Broly, I feel you bro! Kill all those motherfuckers! Muhahahaha! That aside, I love this story man. I think I'll call her Betty! It has a great plot, please try to update soon.
Kyoki Kamanoke Shinigami chapter 5 . 3/31/2013
T_T Broly. Such a pimp. T_T Baradock. I wish I was him. T_T Gohan isn't getting anything T_T He should have a whole fucking harem T_T An idea, pair him with Android 18? Or perhaps a hot alien girl? Throw him a fucking bone here?
Guest chapter 9 . 6/28/2012
great story man i like it keep going if you hit a writers block contact me by email at
bloodyemperor chapter 4 . 5/6/2012
okay wtf iceis is strong as hell!

she could kill all of them.

ps. nice story

sincerly

bloodyemepror
miketech chapter 9 . 1/19/2012
Fantastic story! Would love to read more.
Wicked Lovely 17 chapter 9 . 11/6/2011
LOVE IT!

best Gohan goes into space stories. :D

PLEASE update soon. :D
Dr. Blue22 chapter 9 . 8/16/2011
I love how you have a new earth in here otherwise known as Gaea, real clever and the sun n stuff.

Suggestion though, would be great for Gohan to get a sword along with the gun, after all he did use a sword a few times in the show, As a kid (training with piccolo) , and during Buu saga (the Z-sword)

Update Soon!
Mandalore18 chapter 9 . 8/15/2011
Well I hope you life get better soon. Update when you can.
trogdor8893 chapter 1 . 4/29/2011
Please write more to this story soon ty ur a great writer.
DaBigWilliG chapter 8 . 2/23/2011
realy realy good all the way through
DaBigWilliG chapter 1 . 2/23/2011
realy epic story better than most ive read this is one of the best fanfics ive ever read and (so far at least) thats without porn so well done and keep up the good work
marc chapter 8 . 2/21/2011
great chapter
Shiva the Sarcastic chapter 8 . 2/21/2011
Good work! I can't wait to read more! Please update soon.
FF8 Squall Lionhart chapter 4 . 2/21/2011
On the subject of Broly/Bardock's power levels, realize that nearly the ENTIRE SAIYAN RACE was killed by JUST Frieza. Broly, fine, but Bardock COMPLETELY burying Frieza's most powerful form is a bit... ridiculous. SS1 Gohan is 150,000,000. This SHOULD increase significantly from the beating he took from Cell.

Frieza's top power was 12 million. Bardock is at 350 million. That's more than SS2 Gohan at the Cell games. Its almost triple Goku's power. Recall that Goku, was essentially the chosen one of this anime/manga. If all Saiyans can improve that much that fast, why were there none that could kill Frieza, or even stop his death ball, until Goku? Why was Nappa, who was significantly older than Vegeta, so much weaker than Vegeta? Why was Raditz a pathetic 1220? Did he just not train hard enough, according to you? There has to have been some sort of glass ceiling that canon saiyans ran into that prevented them from reaching the insane power levels seen in DBZ.

I'm not saying its the wrong choice to have characters stronger than the main character, but remember just how much you BURY everyone else when the main character JUST buried everyone else. (That is to say, how weak is Vegeta or Goku compared to these guys. Recall how the Cell Jr.s were beating on them, yet Gohan kills them all with ease.) I mean you introduced a whole set of characters that the canon characters just get outclassed by. Regular foot soldiers went from pathetically beaten by even Krillin to being able to kill KING COLD AND CYBORG FRIEZA BY THEMSELVES.
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