If this story had been written in prose you'd have at least 3 times as many readers. (I noticed that the sequel is in prose. I read a few paragraphs before checking out this story. Now that I've finished this I will read the sequel. I will also put you on author alert). I can't believe that this is your first fan fiction. You capture the series perfectly, the timing, the characters, the cuts, the arc of tension, the snappy dialogue, body language. This story is truly like an episode.

I loved Spike's payback on Halfrek, loved Jonathan, the X-men reference, Spike's spot-on dialogue.

Normally, when I'm reviewing I wonder if I should mention what I didn't like (sometime I do, sometimes I don't). In this case I have no reservations. Lovely Episode!

This is awesome - unbelievable first attempt - keep them coming! especially a sequel - what happens next?

It's not really the end, right? Please tell me it's not the end, that you're gonna do a sequel? Because if you let it that way, it's just too sad. Spike cannot leave her, or at least not forever.

Suffice it to say - there definately will be a sequel. I am a huge B/S shipper, but I don't like how they've been together more recently. That's why the ending was the way it was. I'm not sure if the sequel will be in script format as well - I found it extremely difficult not writing the characters' thoughts, feelings, ect. Just call me a details kind of gal (except when it comes to gods and goddesses LOL) Thanks for all the awesome reviews. It really helped me to focus and keep working on the script every day.

More to come soon hopefully!

What? What? What? What? You evil, evil author.

*Ahem* Sorry about that. Just a little miffed at the way you ended the story. But, I love the rest of it! Really, I do. Arg.

Okay. Starting over.

I loved this fic. It was exciting, suspenseful, and you redeemed Jonathon. And, as was mentioned before, the end made me mad (and sad). But overall, I really enjoyed it.

you stupid evil little!...! how can you do that! i hate you! oaky so i don't hate you, i dont even know you. i did like the story - your a very good author, but dammit there better be a sequal. toodles, all the best!-Juxtose

Minor niggling point. Osiris is male.

Amazing! So many good stories in script format now. Well, at least three, but anyway, it is mind-blowing to think that this is your first fic and it's so fantastic. Most people's scripts are kinda, wel, dumb, but you and frawley are really good at it. Keep it up and I'll be waiting for the final act.

Very good story-please write more ASAP!

i dont think buffy should forgive spike for sleeping with halfrek and she should be sick just by the sight of him

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Very cool story. Jonathan in a skirt was funny but Spike and Halfrek was nausating (and nasty and gross and icky and disgusting, etc.) Still intresting story.

Oh thank god Spike didn't go all 'evil' and kill Xander.

I am confused...why is Spike with Halfrek. I am hoping that he is just doing this to help Buffy out.

Really intresting, I like the story idea.

me likey