|Reviews for Twelve Gates I: Jasper of Agony|
| HBee16 chapter 9 . 9/17/2010
Sorry about the spoiler Qs, but I'm a curious girl. I kinda feel sorry for Antauri about the song, but I have to admit, it's HILARIOUS! PLEASE UPDATE ASAP!
| Starfire 16 chapter 9 . 9/17/2010
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! That was a GOOD explanation! Can't wait for the next chapter! UPDATE SOON PLEASE!
| Halloween Witch chapter 9 . 9/16/2010
Wow, that cleared a lot of things up, and we just love your stories! I loved the past scene where Antauri had to learn the song, that was just plain AWESOME! I mean, you never see Antauri so OOC, so it was a rare treat. I can't wait to see what happens next, get the next chapter up soon!
P.S. Not trying to rush or get in your hair or anything, but you were doing a story request for me, and i just wanted to know how that was coming along, i can't help but feel antsy about it.
| Halloween Witch chapter 8 . 9/11/2010
Great chapter Mikki! I can't wait for another before the next story or however longer you're going to stretch this story out.
As for the question, i might have one or two, maybe a few.
Question 1: How long do you intend for the non existent relationship of Adrassi and Xavier going to last before they finally get together?
Question 2: Was it really hard for you to write this first story of the saga, or did school just get in the way of it?
Question 3: When do you believe you might have this story done and the next one up, the 'Sapphire of Despair'?
Question 4: I am curious. What did give you the idea to come up with this saga? Its great, and i would love to hear how it started out.
Question 5: Last one i promise. Sprx and Nova's relationship i know is hidden from the rest of the team, besides Savanna, but is there a reason for them still not being as close in the story, or is it just hard to put them and Gibson/Savanna and Adrassi/Xavier in the story too?
Thanks Mikki! I can't for whatever happens next! I love a good story! And yours is one!
| HBee16 chapter 8 . 9/11/2010
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! TOO FUNNY! That song was HILARIOUS and Gibson's reaction to Savvy mentioning the daughter was HILARIOUS-ER! OK, questions:
When are Xavier and Adrassi gonna become an official couple?
When are Sparx and Nova gonna announce their official couple-ness?
What messed up nightmare will Xavier have next?
What will the next near-death experience be?
Is the skeletal screwball (SK) gonna stay dead? ('Cuz if there's one thing I know about Shugazoomian villains, it's that they don't stay dead.)
Well, that's all I can think of for now. PLEASE UPDATE ASAP!
| Starfire 16 chapter 8 . 9/11/2010
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! What was that song all about? It was HILARIOUS! Gibson was MAJORLY overreacting with the daughter thing. UPDATE SOON PLEASE!
| YaKkOxXxXAkKo chapter 8 . 9/11/2010
LMAO THAT WAS TOO FUNNY! I TOTALLY LOL-ED HERE! I love it when Savanna says the thing about her first daughter and Gibby panics. That is my fav scene out of everything. I have no questions other than, 'Is it over?' the story I mean.
| YaKkOxXxXAkKo chapter 7 . 9/11/2010
I HAVE BEEN A HORRIBLE FREIND! PLEEZE FORGIVE ME! .'
I haven't been able to review because of school and only just found out it was up. I FEEL SO EMPTY!
So I read your awsome story and I pray to the heavens that it isn't over. I luff it!
| kelly chapter 7 . 9/11/2010
my fav gem is jasper, oh by the way, im srmthfgfan2009, i forgot my password
| Starfire 16 chapter 7 . 9/11/2010
Antauri's right. Since Savanna showed up, Gibson's been acting a whole lot less Gibsonny. Let's hope they don't have to go to a tundra anytime soon, 'cuz that would be unpleasant for Savvy AND Nova. I'm also looking forward to the XavierxAdrassi matchmaking scheme. UPDATE SOON PLEASE!
| Halloween Witch chapter 7 . 9/10/2010
It was good, short and quick to the point, as for the gems, my birthstone is a opal, and my favorite gem out of the saga is the Amethyst of Wickedness.
Can't wait for the next chapter.
| HBee16 chapter 7 . 9/10/2010
ALRIGHT NEW CHAPTER! I was SOOOOOOOO worried about Savvy! I was born in March, so my birthstone is Aquamarine. Of the twelve gems, I have to say the Amethyst of Wickedness sounds the coolest. PLEASE UPDATE ASAP! GO TEAM XAVIERxADRASSI (I STILL HAVEN'T FIGURED OUT A COUPLE NAME)!
| Starfire 16 chapter 6 . 9/10/2010
SWEET! AWESOME ACTION! AAAAAAAHHHHHHH! CREEPY OLD LADY! POOR GIBBY! SPIDERS! UPDATE SOON PLEASE!
| HBee16 chapter 6 . 9/9/2010
POOR GIBBY! I can't really decide on a fav. I like Otto cuz he's ADORABLE, but I'm also a huge SPOVA fan! Chiro & Jinmay are cool too, so I have a really hard time deciding. PLEASE UPDATE ASAP!
| Halloween Witch chapter 6 . 9/9/2010
Nova for sure, she's awesome in every way possible! I wish i could be as good as her!
P.S. Great chapter by the way, can't wait to see the next one!