Reviews for Bite Marks
XxXAura-AshleyXxX chapter 17 . 5/11
The thing about this whole story is it would probably happen this way if said story were cannon. I like it.
Red Turk chapter 4 . 5/15/2013
Hoo mai Rufus O_O Wow this one was quite the chapter I must leave little to my perverted imagination
Red Turk chapter 2 . 5/15/2013
Uh oh...I actually like this twist! Rufus interested in Reno!? Oh man and your canon is exactly the same to mine man XD Tseng having to babysit Rufus until he gets passed over to Reno XD I love this chapter and am eager for chapter 3! Upward and onward!
Red Turk chapter 1 . 5/15/2013
Oh my god O_O I suddenly feel quite ashamed of my reno/rude PWP story XD This is so beautifully written and I love the idea of them wanting more, but unsure of the others reaction, or being fearful of rejection. You have captured their characters so perfectly, and your scenes are set up so wonderfully. Your attention to detail is impressive, and I love the pacing! Well done! On to chapter 2!
Melmel Phase chapter 17 . 12/2/2012
I loooooooovvvvvvvvvvveeeeeeee eee it it was funny, sweet, funny, hot, and even more funny! :D Humor is good for the soul just like yaoi but seriously I almost died reading some of this XD Especially chapter 16. If your cooking is so bad that you have to get your stomach pumped then something is wrong. Very wrong. I suggest Reno gets that checked out XD
Melmel Phase chapter 8 . 11/27/2012
ALL of the plotting :D Aww no fighting for Reno and Rude. It's not allowed
Melmel Phase chapter 5 . 11/27/2012
XD Awwww Tseng sounds so cute while he's drunk very funny chapter. Love it
SoulMore chapter 17 . 8/10/2012
kickcows chapter 17 . 3/25/2012
Wonderful story. :)

I loved the ending. Quite satisfying. :D So glad that Reno just let go.

I loved all the pairings in this. From Reno/Rude, to the stuff with Rufus, to the stuff between Tseng and Rufus. I loved how you got into each their minds. And I really enjoyed reading about Reeve and Elena. That was a pleasant surprise. :)

Really great work on this story. Thank you so much for writing this. :D
HiDiNgFrOmYoU chapter 17 . 3/6/2012
so enthralling. i loved it
Blood Never Lies chapter 17 . 2/26/2012

Lets begin, shall we?

To start; REALLY into the Reno/Rude lovin - yours I must say, is well written, well read and all in all well done.

The characterisation is really good -Kudo's for this, because you've had to write some very different natures to what the characters are presented as by S.E's game.

What I'm drawn to in this is how expressive Rude is - they do say the quiet ones are the ones to watch, and yours is very much so. He's emotional, expressive, thoughtful, but also capable of being withdrawn and cold when it takes him that tactic to accomplish his ends. Its quite a different view of the silent Turk but I strongly approve of it. It seems to fill in the gaps that we all ask ourselves about the man, the biggest question being; what is going on behind those shaded glasses?

And you answer that in a very honest and reliable manner - not sappy, but not too cynical or detached.

Its nice. Very believeable. VERY realsitic.

Reno I also like very much, struggled to keep my temper with him at times I admit, but I get the impression that you were aiming for that. It was good, it kept the story alive and moving forward.

Only critique;

Your potrayal of Reno seems slightly... (pardon my blasphemy!), Cloud-ish, but thats what I meant when I said I struggled to keep my temper at times. I like a more spontanious Reno, but your interpretation called for a more conflicted and self-consious frame of mind for the sake of the plot;

please don't get me wrong - I really liked it and I can see why you've wrote it that way. I'm just not used to it so I thought I'd comment and say personally it caught me a little by surprise.

But all in all, damn well done and I really look forward to seeing more of your work in the future.

All the best!

KittyKandaLuv chapter 17 . 2/25/2012
I love this story so much D: but no lemon yo? D:
Dragon77 chapter 17 . 2/25/2012
I love this story sad to see it end but I'm happy they finally got together.
Soyna chapter 17 . 2/25/2012
OH, what a lovely ending.

Now Rude can keep Reno in line and they can TALK to each other.

Stubborn men!
rowen raven chapter 16 . 10/30/2011
well I've just read the most amazing 16 chapters of a ff7 fanfic I've ever read before. Its been interesting and touching the last 3 chapters specially have made me squirt out a few tears.

Poor Reno, and though I know Rude has reason to be angry and hurt, I have to side with poor Reno, when you are convinced you are not good enough for anyone, its the hardest habit to break, more so then smokes and booze. And there is not a good word to be said about commitment, so he can't be blamed for it. I myself think much like Reno does.

anywho! this is amazing and I hope to have more of this great story, I'm hopping for a big fight the way things are going, before they make up, that or some accident in all that snow will give them a scares that will force them together again. Cus as it is the way Rude is beating the love out of Reno its not to claim it for himself but simply leaving Reno without the capacity to love, quite the different outcome.

I would like to know Rude's reaction when he finally sees the extent of Rufu's damage on Reno's body. I don't see how he could stand such rough treatment, (there is a difference in liking it rough and being a bit abusive) and if Rude would offer something different, instead of hard and fast maybe actually make love to Reno.

Well update soon cus I for one I'm dying to see how this story progresses. Superb job!
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