|Reviews for Pheremones|
| terri chapter 17 . 1/12
Thought you wrote a great version oh Rizzles. Would like to have more descriptive love scenes. Thanks for a very interesting read. Im new to fanfiction, love it.
| terri chapter 13 . 1/12
Allright, didnt see the jealousy coming in to play. Nice job. Lets see what else youve written.
| terri chapter 9 . 1/12
Loving it so far. High hopes for the remainder of your story. You have set the story to be enticing, making me want to read on and given your audience the satisfaction of a " happy ending ". Now, how will you keep me interested? I guess I will have to read on.
| coachd120 chapter 17 . 11/11/2013
I enjoyed the story very much - I just don't see Maura as being so robotic. I don't think she would continue to analyze every little thing. Just too much. Again, you did a great job on this.
| coachd120 chapter 12 . 11/11/2013
I don't think they would go back to being shy after they've been to bed. Actually, I don't think they could sit on the couch and watch TV that easily.
| fangirl81 chapter 17 . 10/12/2013
Well done! I very much enjoyed your writing. There were a few laugh out loud moments that I especially liked.
| free28 chapter 17 . 8/25/2013
great story, thnk you
| free28 chapter 15 . 8/25/2013
wtff pleSe make out
| Trust.Hope.Love chapter 6 . 7/24/2013
I like where this is going so far, I just had to stop for a minute to leave a review.
You say things about character POV, but this is all in 3rd person - not 1st person. Which means that we don't see anything from the characters' perspective, it's from an "all-knowing" third person perspective. Which is great, I love it. I just think that if you want to write in first person, you need to research POV'a and figure out how to do that.
I love your writing and story! Keep up the good work!
| DarXe chapter 17 . 6/23/2013
Very good story. I'm not a fan of angst, but it wasn't overdone. I think if there has to be angst, this was a good amount. Thanks for writing.
| HeatherSS1 chapter 2 . 6/18/2013
"To be remotely convincing as a lesbian, Jane had to ogle Maura's very obvious assets. Clearly, it was part of the job."
I love how Jane rationalizes that, it makes it fairly obvious that she had these feelings even during that case. I like how you wrote Jane's POV.
| HeatherSS1 chapter 1 . 6/18/2013
Wow! I think you captured Maura perfectly, and I loved the increasing banter and sexual tension, and when Maura realizes that it's gone farther then she intended... Can't wait to read more!
| davislp chapter 5 . 6/2/2013
I see that this story has been complete forever and I'm not sure you check these anymore, but your A/N at the end of this chapter is so freaking cute that I couldn't not review. What a sexy chapter. Whew!
| Guest chapter 12 . 5/23/2013
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| Devil Child Vorn chapter 17 . 1/18/2013
This had quite a beautiful ending. I love how Maura addressed Jane's insecurities, and the tenderness in general