Reviews for Broken Halo
ngregory763 chapter 15 . 4/25/2017
What a great story! So much great action with a competent and smart Alec. Really enjoyed the mission and how they slowly got closer. Broke my heart with Trip but it was so well done and their make shift memorial was so warming. Thanks for sharing your thoughts with us!
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Hoshi chapter 15 . 7/24/2016
Great fic. I really enjoyed reading it. A little bit sad with Scarlett and Trip (teary eyes) but sweet with Alec and Max. What can I say I am a goner for tragic love and happy ending.
AJ Granger chapter 15 . 4/1/2016
I really like this story. I like that it is Max and Alec. I like that one or both of them don't get kidnapped and beaten up by someone, a common scenario in fics that put them together. Nicely written, and just different enough to stand out from the other fics out there.
MaraDixen413 chapter 15 . 12/7/2015
That was an amazing story the ending was awesome
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TheCauldron chapter 15 . 3/7/2014
I loved this story! Beautifully written! Your pacing and dialogue is perfect, and the descriptions and weighting is spot on! I would honestly consider this professional writing!
Guest chapter 15 . 1/21/2014
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Guest chapter 15 . 7/20/2013
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scmumsy chapter 15 . 1/8/2013
VERY COOL ENDING! Finally Max & Alec. Thanks good story.
scmumsy chapter 14 . 1/8/2013
Poor Scar. Good-bye Tripp.
scmumsy chapter 11 . 1/7/2013
Wow..Trip. This was very good chapter as were the previous ones. Good job.
scmumsy chapter 10 . 1/7/2013
Max is legendary! Cool! I'm glad she found out it was a good thing to the kids.
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