Reviews for A Flash of Blue on the Floor
King Pepperony chapter 1 . 5/6/2018
This was amazing! I loved it. Dude, I was so sexually frustrated myself when they didn't even kiss in the first movie. I was like...oh, come on! This...this was perfect.
Sarah chapter 1 . 6/6/2015
Wow that Was a really good story! You should write more
Alchemy Between Them chapter 1 . 12/4/2013
That was a very good story, and even better if this was your first one :D
Patty Beltran-Stark chapter 1 . 7/6/2013
OOOhhh Dios muy buena ;)
Sarah d'Emeraude chapter 1 . 6/23/2013
So hot ! loved it.
XOXO
The.Ocean.Shadow chapter 1 . 5/2/2013
adorbs :3
Yoruichi89 chapter 1 . 12/26/2011
great story..
fantasia-49 chapter 1 . 11/26/2011
oh excellent really i love it! If only it could be like this in the movie!
Padackles77 chapter 1 . 12/27/2010
Wow I loved that...it was nice and hot. Good work for a first fic!
kathryn ashworth chapter 1 . 9/3/2010
wow that was well... wow, what an amazing story, can't believe it's your first you are a really talented writer
RomanceDoneWrite chapter 1 . 9/3/2010
Yum.

Let me catch my breath and I'll write a helpful review. :)
saichick-Anna-Erishkigal chapter 1 . 9/2/2010
Whew!

I need to go take a cold shower. :-)
Linneanna chapter 1 . 9/2/2010
you say this is your first story ever? I can't believe it!

your writing is amazing! it's perfect all the way from spelling to grammer, as well as the whole plot! I wish I could write like that :)

the story really is a fantastic piece of work ;) keep writing like that!
thatsyou chapter 1 . 9/2/2010
I must admit I wet my panties on this one and that hasn't happened in a while, mainly because there aren't many good smut fics around. Who am I kidding? There are plenty. But yours was special. Great job!
spc6grl chapter 1 . 9/2/2010
WOW! What else can I say? I mean... wow. That was so wonderful. Man, that's truly what making love should've been like for them in the movie, seriously. I'm breathless, like for real. You are an amazing writer, please write more. What else is there to say, lol, seriously. Wow...