|Reviews for The Greatest Gift to Give|
| mirrorimage33 chapter 1 . 3/10
That was so so SO adorable! :D
| xDarklightx chapter 1 . 1/18/2013
I really like it.
| MMagnet chapter 1 . 12/2/2012
I thought this was simply brilliant for a one shot.
You got a lot across in roughly 6,000 words. Thanks for that.
Hilarity and nervousness is what I found strongest in this. It was a strong mix of emotion that came through well.
I thought the bit with Isshin at the end added a lot of constructive humour to the fic in which added to the characterisation of the story itself.
Because it is late and such; I don't know what else to comment on however your writing style is amazing as well.
| puppyfacetwo chapter 1 . 10/29/2012
Absolutely fabulous for a first lemon fic, a job fantastically well done. :3
| XxItalyangelxx chapter 1 . 10/8/2012
I really thought that was funny at the end but other than that I really liked the whole story
| Sabi chapter 1 . 8/24/2012
Your story is awesome and I hope you continue your fabulous work for a long time!
| life is a parade chapter 1 . 7/23/2012
If this was your first fanfic then you did very good job. I liked how you added some comidy in it, it was funny and good. You should try to do a short five chapeter fic to see how that does, because like I said I really liked your one shot and a your style of writing is intresting; you show their feeling and you can make a scene feel serious, but you know how to add a funny spin on how things goes. So again loved your story and hope you try the short five chapter fic : )
| HELP chapter 1 . 6/8/2012
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| UlquiorraCifersLover chapter 1 . 10/17/2011
This was amazing! Hilarious as well as an amazing lemon. :P
Please do write more :3
| IchiRukiFan200 chapter 1 . 7/11/2011
OMG that was the best grimmichi lemon I have ever read! I fucking loved it! xD You so need to write another one!
| Amaya86 chapter 1 . 6/22/2011
Congrats with your first lemon, it was well done. You have such a lovely writing style, so easy to read. And Ichi impaling himself on Grimm in one go... I can totally see him doing something like that without thinking things through… lol. Hope to see more stories from you :)
| philisnotonfire chapter 1 . 5/18/2011
| vivaciousRingo chapter 1 . 5/5/2011
That was SO fucking adorable and sexy as hell I can barely find enough words to express my awe and adoration!
It's definitely one of the sweetest, hottest and damn funniest (last part especially, *snorts with laughter*)XD oneshots I've ever had the pleasure to read!
I wish you could write more of such!:D
| whitebengal14 chapter 1 . 3/31/2011
Ahahaha! THE EEEEND! The end was so hysterical, I almost died from laughter. xDDD
I really really liked this The dialogue was flawless, the detail was amazing, the lemon was great and original; the humour was fucktastic. :3 I really like your writing style, as well
So... all that being said... you should write more fics. A lot more. and put them up. So I can see them
You should have waaaay more reviews than you have right now. D: You should do something to the document so that it's the first thing that shows up when people look at GrimmIchi. xD (if it works that way, that is...)
I found your story because my hubsters (The Petulant Prodigy, my favourite writer) had you on her Favourite Authors list. So I knew this story had to be good. ;P
The rest is History. I stalked your page a bit, found out that you had connections with Mistress P and Racey (who I'm pretty familiar with) and then decided to read the one fic you had on your page So heeeere I am
*cough* I'm just babbling now. Amazing writing, you should write more. Like, right now. ;P Haha.
Good luck with your future writings and I hope to see more from you soon
| crochetamommy chapter 1 . 2/14/2011
awesome! loved it. great job. lemon was great. loved the whole story.!.