|Reviews for Polar Bears Do It|
| Viola Cornuta chapter 1 . 9/4/2010
| twificfan chapter 1 . 9/4/2010
Oh, Oh, Oh, that was so much fun and very hot! Great job!
| PurpleBrina17 chapter 1 . 9/3/2010
wet cold sex with Edward in the volvo and you wanna know what I think? I think that was FUCKHOT
| sophie921 chapter 1 . 9/3/2010
Too, too bad this is gonna be a one shot. A followup could be all kinds of angsty sexy stuff.
| Cherylmmm chapter 1 . 9/3/2010
This o/s is such a tease...u should continue it for the sake of your dear and loyal readers...LoL but really you should...pretty please! You left the ending open for continuation! :o)
| my2galspal chapter 1 . 9/3/2010
So, are you going to continue this? Just kidding, please don't throw anything at me.
That was quite fun and I thoroughly enjoyed it. I was afraid you were just going to have them keep missing each other.
Thanks so much for sharing this with the rest of us. I look forward to seeing you extend it. Kidding, I kid!
| Sunflowerfields chapter 1 . 9/3/2010
GREAT O/S, I felt sorry for Bella constantly wanting to meet him and fantasizing about him but, never getting the chance. He fantasies finally came true in the end though and what an ending it was. I loved it! ***pouting*** too bad it's a O/S
| arlzs chapter 1 . 9/3/2010
I'm so glad you added this to ff, Air! I read it on Twinklings, but now I feel obligated to review for you.
You're good with the OS, bb...maybe too good! It's your own fault, you know. Your title is great...I had no idea where it was going to come in until it came upon us.
So, I won't suggest a full-on SS expansion, but how about a little EPOV when they were first on the beach and Edward (apparently!) did notice Bella? Hmmm? Come on. You KNOW you want to.
| browneyesandhair chapter 1 . 9/3/2010
Thanks for putting such a fun story out here in crack fiction land! I really enjoyed your words. I know you said this is a one shot but it would be fun to see what happens in the summer with these two.
| LoveTwilightIMC chapter 1 . 9/3/2010
Omg. You should not be allowed to write one shots. Your writing is way better than that. You should so consider doing a full story on this. I can't help but say it. Like I said you shouldn't be allowed to write one shots. This was awesome. I really hope you do more on it but if not I understand.
| colourfulchatterbox chapter 1 . 9/3/2010
I like it :D
Normally I would ask for a follow up...but I think it might drag out too much...it would be nice to see a follow-up, but it doesn't need one :D
What it does need is Edward's POV ;D Technically that isn't a follow-up...it's a companion :)
| murmure etoile chapter 1 . 9/3/2010
| Rbeccap chapter 1 . 9/3/2010
It was such a cute story..can't wait till summer comes again and another story comes out? Loved the build up and the interaction when it finally happened!
| ilovealion chapter 1 . 9/3/2010
I see why your beta wanted you to continue this story! This hook-up could make for interesting summer sexcapades. Or, Bella could just go ahead and move to Forks! If you write it, we wil read! Thanks for writing!
| jansails chapter 1 . 9/3/2010
Dayyyyyuuumm that was goooood!
The characterizations made the piece: the visiting, intelligent, bored girl; the attractive, out of reach newcomer.
Having them meet in the library where they could share their intelligence & interests, while testing the waters of their attraction was an excellent way to put bond them.
Bella committing to doing something outrageous & out of character for her, made it exciting, daring, led by the golden boy.