Reviews for Tragic Love
EmmyGoldsworthy13 chapter 1 . 8/27/2011
Awhh. This was so sad. I loved the ending, but it was even sadder than the rest of it. You use dialogue really well, which a majority of writers don't take the time to do. You make everything seem real, and not just coming out of nowhere. There are only a small group of writers on here that can do that, and you're one of them. Good job, this made me cry, and it was really good.
storytwister18 chapter 1 . 9/5/2010
Oh my god I cried it was so sad...but it is writen very well ]
Ariel C. Rilmonn chapter 1 . 9/4/2010
ahhhh write more! i hope this isnt a one shot...great writing, i wanna read more!
Feral Gee chapter 1 . 9/3/2010
I loved it. You write really well! Keep it up.
nooooooooooo chapter 1 . 9/3/2010
:( sad stuff man. lol good story tho. i was scared. its takes a good story to make the reader feel the emotions, and i did. very good :) keep writing.