It would also help if Naruto had more money to take Aiko out on a date, not to mention that very few places would allow Naruto to enter them. That would put a dampener on any dates.

According to Narutopedia, D ranks pay between 5,000 and 50,000 ryo...

it's a bummer u never finished it but this fanfiction had so much potential

this was wholesome af

I'm happy with this change but also sad, I like the character development you're giving to the other characters

The sasuke vs gaara fight was honestly so fucking horrible ngl... you made gaara to weak... and also there was no way in hell sakura would have injured neji even if he was severely underestimating her.

Chapter 15: Wow, I didn't expect that move from Ino, but I think it will end up being a toxic relationship. (:C) Chapter 18: Honestly, Ino was more than I expected. I wouldn't mind if Ino was at least considered to expand her clan as a secondary wife below Aiko. I think developing her character in the long term this would make sense.
Chapter 40: Fangirls like Ami should have some small plot, I always imagined them as future psychotic women. At least Ino should be considered an extra wife, I liked how mature she was to start a relationship again for the right reasons. ( ͡ ͜ʖ ͡)

'I don't take apprentices' even though he's previously trained all the konan Nagato and whatever other bros name is...Peins Pals.. this is truly abhorring bruh jiraiya is someone I could never handle being close to

'I'm missing out on valuable research time' yo I hate jiraiya ngl.. tells his students to be serious then pushes them excessively so that he can go do immature shit.. and he a damn godfather..

funny how the running theme for the 17 chapters so far are people never getting to know Naruto then wondering why he doesn't know something, like they can't fathom the fact an orphan had never been taught ANYTHING but don't care enough to pry and figure it out. Saddening; I'd have gone mad as Naruto no question

it's hilariously impressive seeing Naruto practicing his Chakra control..I always imagine Naruto has to deal with his excessive Chakra like a person in a huge excavator does when trying to pick up just a pebble and nothing else with said excavator

Now I am quite saddened about fact that you didn’t complete the full story, I greatly appreciated the overview of everything thank you for that very much. This is a great story in itself with how you made things play out and, I greatly appreciate the Naruto struggling with his mental health. It normalized him in a way the I feel Kishimoto should’ve. I wish you would’ve eased into him having those problems a little more over time, but it’s not my story and I see a lot of great little and big things you did with it. Especially the bar chapter with Sakura and Naruto. “That’s not an iwa nin that’s your mother” is now my favorite line of any fanfic ever. Thank you for the great read and posting this story for other people to enjoy.

Why the hell does naruto love the villagers i can believe that he loves konaha but why does he live the hypocritical citizens they have never given him a reason to love them

there are many examples that shows that citizens of konoha are hypocrites of extreme level

Sakumo died because of depression which was caused by the villagers rumors. Rumors that danzo started because he was jealous of sakumo and because sakumo prioritized his teammates over his mission yet the hypocrite hiruzen talks about every citizen of konaha being family regardless of blood ties that are connected through will of firehow konoha is a tree and its citizens are the leaves other such brainwashing bullshit

then when orochimaru betrayed the village they started treating anko like plague

naruto wasn't even given his parents belongings like what the hell man minato was a war hero, s rank Ninja, and the hokage of konaha, he would have some money for the future where did it all go, he would also have some ninjutsu scrolls where are they

kushina was also from uzumaki clan she would have atleast some sealing jutsu

naruto was given nothing from konaha but hatred and was only acknowledged after a decade of trying and literally talking nagato into reviving the villagers after they died
and even then I think thet most of them did it more out of fear then sincerity

kakashi did not train him in anything besides tree walking
jiraiya wasted the three years by only teaching him how to make a bigger rasengan, how to dispell genjutsu, and how to use his clones in taijutsu more effectively. instead of taking advantage of his large chakra reserves and healing factor to train him in ninjutsu and weight training for taijutsu, he tried to teach him how yo use kurama chakra thinking that it will help him defeat akatsuki yet he forgot that without being a perfect Jinchuuriki itachi or kisame could suppress him with MS or samehada
Kakashi also took three years to tell naruto about shadow clone training method, naruto also learned wind chakra Manipulation from some tips from asuma and Yamato helping him by creating a waterfall

yet he still loves the village and the villagers more than his own family by working 24 hours in hokage office and ignoring his family. it was never shown that hiruzen or tsunade did this much work without shadow clones and naruto is shown to be working 24 hours with shadow clones helping him

these are some of the reasons that I don't like naruto. and also because how much of his potential naruto wasted

quite decent

Dude really gave Sasuke a fucking harem at the end. Fucking trash author