Reviews for The Boy Who Lived
prodige chapter 1 . 9/3/2010
That was actually really interesting to read. I like that he dismisses his doubts, it seems very Dumbledore-y.

I think you just need to work on developing your techniques, like how a character is introduced and their thought processes.

The idea was amazing and it was great to read D nice one!
Lissome Lilt chapter 1 . 9/3/2010
I liked it, and it was very Dumbledore-ish. He doesn't really think that he makes mistakes, even if he knows he has before.

It was a good idea.
hergoldeneyes chapter 1 . 9/2/2010
I liked it, hun :3 A few grammatical errors here and there, but nothing too bad.

You have great ideas, whether you like it or not.


April; hergoldeneyes