I loved getting insight into Tony's mind! He's definitely a bit tortured, and I can't wait to find out more about him. Thanks for sharing!

Ok, now you've done it! I have to start printing out your story, 1 page at a time and put it in a book form so I can go back and forth through the pages to look stuff up and not have to wait for my phone to load the next page. Geez! Lol

On the other hand, it will be easier to read to my husband that way. : )

Man I love your stuff!

THANK YOU for this outtake! What a wonderful surprise tohear a little of what's going on inside of Tony/Edward's noggin.

Tony seems a little crazy. Hopefully there is a better explanation.

I saw Santana at the Atlantic City Race Track in 1974 with CSNY. They were magnificent. It was before they recorded She's Not There. I remember the sixties version with the Zombies. It was good but without the great guitar playing of Carlos Santana.

Ah ha! So he isn't a dick after all huh? He does like our Bella..

there you go, as I thought.

tpov (he IS still tony here...) was illuminating.

absolutely adorable, torn and falling hard for our heroine.

but still refusing to admit he is worth some happiness - in true Edwardian style... ;-)

I love it

now, please get back to the main story, I am DYING to know what happens next!

cheers

anna

I'm kind of torn between appreciating this lovely little insight into the troubled hero's mind and thinking, shit, could the author been writing some more of the exciting main story?

I'm coming down on the positive side. Though I had kind of suspected something like that to be going on in "Tony's" head, I really liked the way you wrote out his feelings and made me like him a little bit more.

Well done.