|Reviews for Concrete Jungle|
| Principi Phantasia chapter 8 . 3/30
The most realistic take of the 'after'! Do continue!
| angela.chamberlain.180 chapter 8 . 2/11/2014
Please continue this story I love it so far
| Cassie Gibson chapter 8 . 12/2/2011
This is so addictive, Keep writing!
| ZombieRachelLOVESZombieQuinn chapter 1 . 11/5/2011
Ohhh, this sounds really good so far. I actually just saw The Breakfast Club for the first time time other day and I loved it. I couldn't stop wondering if something wrote some fanfiction about about it. Your's sounds great so far, I can't wait to read more.
| teamjacob3539 chapter 8 . 11/3/2011
I loved it :)
| sfbxfcb chapter 8 . 10/29/2011
Wonderful! Write More! I love Allison and Andy!
| sfbxfcb chapter 2 . 10/29/2011
One Tree Hill! And I wish that was her name
| helinahandcart chapter 7 . 10/14/2011
Yay an update, can we have another one?
I like that John can actually do the math if he puts his mind to it., Poor Brian I don't envy him telling mommy dearest.
| melniewn chapter 7 . 10/14/2011
Another great chapter. I really like the interactions - and love the courage you are giving them. Is sam baker from 16 candles?
| sfbxfcb chapter 6 . 9/5/2011
| kioshi chapter 6 . 8/10/2011
loved your story ,keep going :)
| supremeloser chapter 6 . 7/29/2011
i really love this story because its the very first i have read about the breakfast club since i recently discovered the movie...please update i look foward to it
| HuffMuffer chapter 5 . 5/22/2011
AWESOME! HURRY UP AND WRITE ANOTHER CHAPTER! JOHN&CLAIRE FOREVER
| Billie chapter 5 . 5/19/2011
Continue NOW :)
| recey2010 chapter 5 . 5/11/2011
While this is the best Monday after fic i have read in a long time I have one major concern Allison is my favorite character and unfortunately while u have her character written almost prefectly you fail to make her parents as they were describe in the movies She said they Ignore Her, but in your fic they are just actin like regular annoyn parents nothin out of the ordinary
Other than that the story is great and I really encourage you to continue with it and to expand upon the OCs youve created bcuz they play a vital role in the development of the main characters
Also a minor flaw was the Brians friend seemed to worship Claire but in the movie it was alluded that they would not like Claire so much as she would believe
You have Claire character on point! And as a reader I would love for u to explore the home life of each club member.
I knw this is ALOT but the Breakfast CLub is One of My favorite movies and is highly unwritten in the Fanfic world
SO PLEASE DONT ABANDON THIS THIS REVIEW IS NOT A FLAME I LOVE UR WORK UPDATE ASAP