|Reviews for The Diamond of Two Destinies|
| PenGator3 chapter 5 . 10/10/2013
And it seems that a plan is coming to fruition for the very three...
Cross your fingers...
| PenGator3 chapter 4 . 10/5/2013
Looks like that the pressures of the jailbreak are starting to get to them big time.
Oh well, let's walk on by...
| PenGator3 chapter 3 . 12/22/2012
Talk about disproportionate retribution much, right?
Times like this make me wish I had played the game more often...
| PenGator3 chapter 2 . 12/22/2012
And so the adventure begins...
Kinda puts the term 'Wedding Crashers' into a whole new meaning, don't it?
| PenGator3 chapter 1 . 3/24/2012
It's been a while since I heard of dear old Jazzy-boy here; now, he's in fanfiction awaiting to be wed...
Quoting William Shakespeare, "the world is a stage..."
Good for you, man... good for you...
| bryan mccloud chapter 4 . 7/16/2011
lol...nice chapter man...and about spaz...he really needs to be put on a leash like a dog...with an unlimited amount of rope...lol.
i am sure jazz will surely beat him up next time...lol.
| JJMAN65 chapter 2 . 10/8/2010
| SoulCatcher12 chapter 2 . 9/26/2010
Hey there! Sorry for the late review but all kinds of things have been happening that take my time away.
Anyway, about this chapter... *prepare for praises and criticism* P
I love how you make it seem like the most perfect day ever in the beginning. Honestly, your detail is amazing. I love it when writers take the time bring the reader into the setting. Though sometimes you start describing everything and that's okay, but it takes a little away from the main scene.
The way the queen is portrayed is hilarious! A fairly large, grumpy, protective mother with a short fuse...pretty much sums up every mom on a bad day. Though I'll never tell my mom that...
I can't wait to find out more about this Devan person/turtle/guy(he seems like a kind, generous, and level headed person to me, NOT), and of the fate of our heroes! Seriously what a twist, locking up the main character before the adventure even begins! Good chapter my friend! ...Though the 'smirked a smile' bit threw me off a bit...:-P
| SoulCatcher12 chapter 1 . 9/21/2010
Very well written person who I have never met before! *shifty eyes*
I love the way you discribe the settings and the characters; descriptive without getting too wordy and lifelike without going anatomic. I can actually picture your characters and not get them confused because of how they are described when they first enter the scene.
The dialogue is just so... you! I could really imagine you saying most of the things in this story. The cheerful banter between Jazz and Spaz (which is a lovely name for a brother D)makes a somewhat bad situation (because really, who needs a ring THAT big?)into a laughable family moment. That brings up another thing, the story! As you know, I am unaware of the Jazz Jackrabbit storyline, but through only one chapter, you have filed me in on an adventurous amazing backstory of your characters.
... hmmm I really should stop now... I'm going to continue reading the next chapter and then you will hear from me again stranger who totally didn't show me this story.
| Xamem-The Heart of Oblivion chapter 1 . 9/18/2010
:D Finally got to read this!
I don't think it was too detailed. It was detailed enough though that I knew what was happening! (Don't bag on yourself! This was good!)
I didn't know rabbits ate birds...that kinda scared me...:P
Spaz is Spazzy, which is of course good.
Nice job, keep up the good work!
Xamem-The Heart of Oblivion
| Shadowani chapter 1 . 9/3/2010
Its a good start :) but I wonder where you want to go with this as an adventure humor story.