Reviews for Forever Mine
daperbianchicomanda chapter 12 . 3/16
fuck no
HoneySama chapter 17 . 12/18/2018
Quite stupid why did u make naru so izuna didnt hit sasuke,he'd kill naruto for sure and he still dare say he love naruto? doesn't deserve naruto n izuna at all. ...stupid ...if he wants prove something as similar as has the truest love for stand such stupidity
Paige chapter 2 . 8/17/2018
A lovely piece of art
Pat your head chapter 11 . 3/10/2018
No. Kakashi killed Rin to get the sharingan. Rin was one of his teammates, sometimes presumed lover, so he was devastated when he killed her by accident. Therefore, your story is flawed.
Guest chapter 17 . 2/23/2018
Lol I love it. “Father you may kiss the bride”
Arw165 chapter 17 . 2/19/2018
I was kind of disappointed with Madara's death. The amount of "screen time" he got in the first half of the fic made me think he was important and you were going somewhere with his sub plot. But then it's as if you decided "let's just get rid of him". He was barking a lot, but didn't bite much. He could have been cut out from the story and the fic wouldn't change too much. Except for him killing Neji, maybe that was his whole purpose?
I have a feeling you haven't had the plot planned out from the beginning (not that it's bad in itself, many writers work like that).

How did Naruto know about Itachi's mission and the coup d'etat? Or how did he know Sasuke knew about that as well? They hardly talked.

Since you have only one chapter left I wish you all the best in completing the story one day.
Kaede999 chapter 17 . 6/2/2017
why you didnt continue thia fanfiction?!
Guest chapter 10 . 3/12/2017
WTF man...why did you kill him... Neji...whats your problem _ ,
Guest chapter 11 . 1/8/2017
Actually kakashi got his mangekyo when he accidentally killed rin.
Guest chapter 17 . 10/23/2016
It annoyed me that naruto could be so needy and week to accept sasuke back so fast but other then that it was not bad it would funny if the kid ended up with sakura kid lol but not bad the story just naruto a lil needy thought he would fight or have sasuke try and show him he did love him and make him work for it not give in so easy but good work
Hinatauchiha1 chapter 17 . 10/10/2016
Please update so we can read the end,I hope naru can have another baby boy xD
Uzumaki Uchiha's chapter 15 . 2/27/2016
I've missed this story hopefully you will update more and also I do like the idea of a twilight harry potter crossover especially if it's harry and Edward lol I love those stories! Their are so few out there
Guest chapter 12 . 8/26/2015
That searching 9 villages was fucking stupid. Why wouldn't Sasuke go to Kohona to find Naruto
geek the freak chapter 9 . 7/28/2015
Birth time super cool story
Guest chapter 4 . 4/21/2015
What the fuck is this shit? This has no plot, not standard canon characteristics and traits and no embedded sophistication whatsoever. This is barely a Fanfiction, and far from a story. You need experience to write. You need an extensive vocabularly and you need to know what and where you are going with the story. This seems like just a collection of ideas thrown together with a mix of stupidity and naiveness. Learn your stuff.
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