|Reviews for Unraveled|
| Justice Tokidoki chapter 1 . 8/22
Wow, this was pretty incredible. A great way of showing how confusing and tangled the relationships can get between Sora, Kairi, Roxas, and Namine. The characterization of everyone was spot on. I really enjoyed seeing this twisted version of Namine and Kairi, along with Sora's efforts to bring them back to sane territory.
| DemolitionLvr chapter 1 . 3/5/2012
This was so good. Like wow. Talk about multiple personalities. Really great writing and original idea. Namine taking revenge on Kairi for stealing Roxas. I love it.
| truthlieslovestars chapter 1 . 1/15/2011
| V-departed chapter 1 . 1/9/2011
Messed up in the best possible way. Nice work here, it really does carry the proud tradition of 'Boys Will Be', doesn't it? Creepy, emotional and disorientating. Good work.
| ParadiseAvenger chapter 1 . 11/12/2010
That was pretty wicked, a little confusing, but good all the same.
| radiohysteria chapter 1 . 9/26/2010
i always knew namine would eventually get jelous of kairi
| Ice Princezz chapter 1 . 9/11/2010
A nice story I like it it's got a crazy twist I love that
| angelofsweetness chapter 1 . 9/11/2010
Wow! Totally intense!
Namine's one psycho. :P
Well-written, you pulled off the emotions perfectly. I could feel Sora's pain in watching Kairi go insane.
Keep writing! :)
| caitlinkeitorin chapter 1 . 9/4/2010
o.o that. was. awesome. it was soo ooc but I LOVED IT
sorry but i liked this a lot more than some of ur fluffy stories XD
| luckynumbereight chapter 1 . 9/4/2010
This is easily going on my favorites.
The emotion and detail was so perfect... Ahhh i just love everything!
I wish i could read more but i know it's a oneshot so uurggh. Please write more often, haha :)
| DeadRunway chapter 1 . 9/3/2010
Can I just say I love this? You're a seriously good writer. I love that there are still beastly one-shot writers on fanny and that the whole site hasn;t gone completely to the dogs!
You did very good!
| The Genius Mage chapter 1 . 9/3/2010
*groans* Thanks for the Nightmare Fuel.
Wow, this was chilling. But very good. I kinda/sorta get the ending, I mean, I get it enough to have a sense of closure. But damn, this was creepy as hell. Poor, insane Kairi. XD