Reviews for The Short Second Life of Kyle Vega
lovedoesn'thurt chapter 1 . 8/20/2011
I like your story, but start a new line when someone is talking, k? It's just a tip, keep writing :-)
CosmicLOVE1996 chapter 1 . 9/7/2010
very confusing to read. Needs Point of Views. IT THE TRUTH

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