Reviews for Slender Minded
Ura Omote Author chapter 21 . 5/18/2013
That was creepy. The ending was the final blow. And boy did it hurt. :)
FluffDragoness chapter 21 . 3/31/2013
Simply BRILLIANT! Love the story and the fact Ophelia was a prissy high school girl that we all love to hate. Slender man was pretty good too. I've got the game on my phone and I'm not sure about playing it now... Slender man is watching me!
rapono chapter 21 . 12/17/2012
Amazing Story! One of the Best Slender Stories I've EVER Read! This Should Be A Small Book!

But I Understood what slendy was really doing to her. If she didn't react violently to him, she wouldn't have died.

(also i would have kept that Slender Poster from the beginning but i think my parents wouldn't like it... XP)
TheSpazChik chapter 21 . 9/8/2012
Ummm. Alright, this is my opnion. Choose to ignore it or not i dont really care. Here goes...

First of all, I dont really like Ophelia. Im just gonna be straight forward. This was a good original story idea but the main character was a spoilt brat just feeding into the spoiled rich girl stereotype. maybe its just the way i was raised but i would never call my Grandmother a b!tch. I was raised to respect my elders no matter what and thats how i write my stories. know what, i think thats it...but like i said ignore it or not i dont care...
Animeguard chapter 1 . 9/5/2012
Lost me at "...and a bookcase that only had Twilight in it,"
Is there really no other books you could reference? Any books better than Twilight? Come on, that's not hard. Everything is better than Twilight.
Poe's Cat chapter 21 . 8/14/2012
Holy crap.

Over the course of the three days I've read this, I literally couldn't wait to log back on and read more. I'd recommend publishing it with all of my heart.

10,000 points to Griffendor.
Crayon-Eatero3o chapter 21 . 3/12/2012
I love this. SO. MUCH.

Ophelia on the other hand, is a brat. At first I hated her. I still don't like her, but I can't help but feel bad for her. I didn't think she quite deserved to be put through such phsycological torture like that.

The ending. I saw that coming. I mean the part that she dies. But the way she went down surprised me. (sorry if you don't get this next part) it sorta reminds me of Death Note. I couldn't help but hate the main character from that anime, but felt bad for him. Especially in the end. Both of them went down making a fool of themselves in front of people who trusted them.

Sorry for the stupid review :P
xxxCARxCRASHxHEARTxxx chapter 21 . 10/19/2011
That was good! A very strong ending. I had a feeling it would end that way but the circumstances surrounding the end were what surprised me. Except for a few spelling and grammar issues this was AWESOME.
ScarletLycrois chapter 21 . 10/18/2011
YOU KILLED HER OFF! Awwww man! I thought this would end kinda like Chucky! Not really ridden of the villain but left for a sequel!
xxxCARxCRASHxHEARTxxx chapter 18 . 10/17/2011
it's official, this is an amazing story
xxxCARxCRASHxHEARTxxx chapter 16 . 9/27/2011
To make it more realistic I thought you should know, I doubt that the cops would be so angry when talking to a girl who from their perspective, is absolutely insane.

On top of that I'm pretty sure they'd throw her in a mental hospital first, seeming as unstable as she is.
Agent Michigan chapter 8 . 9/6/2011
I know I'm double postin' and I'll probably do it again.

Why, have good o' Slendy talk? That's one of the things that make him scary. If it can't talk, you can't reason with it.
Agent Michigan chapter 4 . 9/6/2011
I'd like a Slender Man poster. . .I hope it "eats" her.
xxxCARxCRASHxHEARTxxx chapter 1 . 8/6/2011
Are we supposed to hate the main character and hope Slendy eats her?

I hope he eats her and her emo hipster sister. I dont know who I dislike more
ScarletLycrois chapter 9 . 3/5/2011
I think this is a great story so far! You've written the tension in this story perfectly!

I don't think that Ophelia is a Mary-Sue, this story I think is showing great teen-angst.

However, it would have been better if you kept the Slender Man faceless but this is your version of him so it's okay!

Keep on writting! D
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