|Reviews for Ebony and Ivory|
| SonicAmy1996 chapter 13 . 9/22/2014
Lol Shadow's middle name is Dexter xD Anyway, I'm loving the story so far, and I hope your gonna continue it. I'm gonna end up adding this to my favorite and follow!
| Guest chapter 13 . 7/25/2014
Y el siguiente capi :,c porfa publique ;n; quiero saber que pasara ...hmp, bueno tendré que esperar, creo u.u
| showmetheuniverse chapter 7 . 7/13/2014
Ice cream metaphors! Very clever!
| Solarknight117 chapter 9 . 1/6/2014
YES! Kill more terrorists!
| Solarknight117 chapter 7 . 1/6/2014
Best. Shadow scene. EVER!
| Floral Heels chapter 13 . 4/29/2012
This... this is fantastic. The plot is interesting and well-developed, it isn't cliche or anything. I could hardly see any errors with the grammar, except a few with the dialogue.
Dialogue is written as:
"Hello," she said (as you know). "Hello!" she said.
"Hello," she smiled. "Smiled" is not a speech verb, so you shouldn't punctuate the dialogue with a comma, but a period instead, capitalizing the pronoun, of course. So it's written as, "Hello." She smiled.
It hasn't been updated since '11, and I'm hoping you're not dead. This story is wonderful, written beautifully, and has some funny moments. There were about 27 times when I laughed out loud.
| nitoki chapter 13 . 4/23/2012
Please update soon! This is one of the best stories I've read on here :)
| Krispina The Derp chapter 8 . 3/25/2012
lol the scene with Shadow barging in the was pure Gold!
| Yuli Ban chapter 13 . 1/4/2012
Oh, don't worry about a short chapter. It was more than worth it.
| charissa chapter 1 . 12/14/2011
very very good
| buterfly1 chapter 13 . 10/14/2011
Your storys really really good, I love it! I cant wait untill the next chapter is updated. I never really thouht of Shadow and Rouge as a couple before reading this, but it makes a much better story than with Shadows other girlfriends.
| 8 Trigrams 64 Palms chapter 13 . 9/10/2011
Please continue this story it's awesome! Aw man... you gotta resolve this cliffhanger fast before I rip my hair out! LOL XD
| Prinzack chapter 13 . 7/26/2011
It's nice to see Shadow's kickass, confident personality surface again. While I love the fluff between him and Rouge, I like to be reminded of how awesome he is. ;)
By now, you know how I feel about your writing and how much I respect your hard work, so I'm going to try and focus on the things that might need more attention.
I think the only thing about this chapter that stood out was the end, especially with Rouge's little Plan B. It felt short lived, and therefore a tad unnecessary. It sounded like Shadow was merely bothered by it for two seconds, then waved it away. Also, the end itself sounded relatively blunt. Other than that, it's good to see some tension come up between the lovebirds.
| SonicGirl89 chapter 12 . 7/25/2011
Thanks for updating this chapter.:) It really made my day. It was both humorous and romantic. Got me back into Shadouge. And what a coincidence that your wrote a beach scene with the two. Might help with the story I'm working on. After reading this story I really enjoyed the nice touch of added Rouge's thoughts from her Journal entry and him reading Boy if she finds out, she's gonna get him good.:P But it actually helped at the same time, so maybe it isn't all that bad. I also loved this line you used to describe Shadow's thoughts: The sound of the waves rolling softly over the beach mirrored the sound of thoughts slowly rolling over in his mind – ever turning, never furious, yet always restless.
Describes Shadow perfectly.:) That and it just sounds really good.
Then there's was the funnies with Omega and Sonic. Poor But I think he deserved it.:P Shouldn't be spying on Shadow and Rouge anyway.
It was very touching when Shadow said "I belong with you" too. I couldn't resist an awwww...lol It was cute. As sexy as a couple people make them to be, I like the cute moments the best.:) Guess I'm just into sappy romance, but it always works like a charm.;)
And lastly... God help Sonic with his mental Of course we know he hates to lose a chili dog after Sonic and the Black So what you wrote works perfect.:) That and Sonic's always been a chili dog lover. He needs to stop eating and fess up to But I suppose that's for another story.
Thanks again for writing.:) I appreciate all your additions to Shadouge fanfiction.
Hope to read more from you soon.
| Prinzack chapter 5 . 7/23/2011
Ahh, impressed as always with your descriptively detailed passages. Nice to see work with more than just a throng of pointless dialogue.