|Reviews for Desperate is the Silence|
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/8/2014
| mia-dcwut-09 chapter 1 . 7/24/2011
I never thought id say this but i think im rooting for uther to keep merlin since arthur is so stupid to not see him this was so heartbreaking
| SURGEON GENERAL chapter 1 . 3/18/2011
You should really, write another story like this. That story was brilliant. It was provacative and sad all at once.
| Divane chapter 1 . 12/31/2010
I loved it 3 More stories of that sort please!
| cheekysorcerer chapter 1 . 11/17/2010
this is really beautiful!
i loved the emotions...
totally enjoyed reading it!
| Primer Dimer chapter 1 . 11/11/2010
You have a great turn of phrase. Your writing is often evocative and you have a good vocabulary too. You writing flows pretty well and your emotive phrases aren't overwrought for the most part.
You highlighted the almost necessary dysfunction in a relationship involving Uther and you did so quite well. However, I did find the situation a little incongruent until I realised that a relationship had already been established by your protagonists. It was initially difficult to see why Uther would be so absorbed by someone who is essentially a servant.
In terms of objective constructive criticism is that your first sentence has a typo; a missing 'the' before 'corridor'.
| Latinerica chapter 1 . 10/3/2010
Wow amazing story such raw emotion. The only thing is you have it under leon, but great story x