|Reviews for Same Old Thing|
| Soozie Quixotic chapter 1 . 9/3/2010
I can't really comment on anything about Loonatics Unleashed because I've never watched it. I also can't keep track of all of these characters, but it's probably because I don't know the fandom. I guess that the Avalon connection must come in later - unless this "Storm" is Stormbringer the mistwolf...but she has arms and acts nothing like Stormbringer, so I don't know, LOL.
Your writing is fast-paced, but it's almost all dialogue with barely any description. I noticed a few grammar mistakes, especially two homophone confusions in the first line. Maybe you could've looked over it more before you posted it. The scene also feels dull because there's little conflict and it doesn't start the plot.
Anyway, I'm looking forward to Avalon coming into play.